Rate my joint

[Psyklone]

Peace ya'll.

Think we should have a section called "rate my track/joint/track" as we do have one for first beats and all that 

I have done a track with ma homie Salvage (a cat tha's been making beats for a while now and also rappin) that I'd like ya'll to give a listen and provide feed back...

http://download944.mediafire.com/g8xxv42czjmg/mzcolz5znm5/trapped+behind+barz+Salvage+and+Psyclone.mp3

[SUPER RUTHLESS]

Like the beat, very laid back and easy on the ear.
Sound quality is terrible, so it makes it hard to hear whats being said but if thats u on the 2nd verse, props, i like the flow there...

Oh and the chorus sucks lol but otherwise it has a good underground feel

[Psyklone]

Like the beat, very laid back and easy on the ear.
Sound quality is terrible, so it makes it hard to hear whats being said but if thats u on the 2nd verse, props, i like the flow there...

Oh and the chorus sucks lol but otherwise it has a good underground feel

Ahhh...good looks fam! Thanks for the honesty, and yeah das me on da 2nd verse  . As for the quality, I think you can maybe advise which good quality mic (that is not kinda heavy on da price) that we can cop? Maybe and also a middle range sound card?

Thanks once more...

[Psyklone]

Keep sleepin on my sh!t ya'll.

Make it or brake it?

Baby come here snippet 

[Psyklone]

Freaky Cee feat. Shack Man - Fallen M3N

LINK REMOVED/?znjijdyghiz

[Sosiba]

I listened to "Trapped behind Bars". Maybe I'm deaf mara I thought the sound quality was not that bad. The lyricism, beat and delivery is nothing amazing though, just standard which is not a bad thing, I'm letting the track take up the little memory on my PC.

[jberry106]

oh, my goodness me you poor child.

come to mamy. embrace mamy like a coccoon, or like you would a warm vagina.

a smelly vagina.

don't say my vagina smells because I will fucking sue you, cunt.

you're a cunt.

straight up and simple, you = cunt.

don't you ever call my vagina fucking smelly OK?

HAVE WE GOT THAT THRU YET EINSTEIN

people on the net saying blah bleh, we eastside mans yo, frekway, tu vagine frikkin rank man.


I'm telling you now and for STRAIGHT my vagina is not fucking smelly ok so you can fuck off with that shit for a start, capiche?

fuckin lizards.

peace.

[Myth]

oh, my goodness me you poor child.

come to mamy. embrace mamy like a coccoon, or like you would a warm vagina.

a smelly vagina.

don't say my vagina smells because I will fucking sue you, cunt.

you're a cunt.

straight up and simple, you = cunt.

don't you ever call my vagina fucking smelly OK?

HAVE WE GOT THAT THRU YET EINSTEIN

people on the net saying blah bleh, we eastside mans yo, frekway, tu vagine frikkin rank man.


I'm telling you now and for STRAIGHT my vagina is not fucking smelly ok so you can fuck off with that shit for a start, capiche?

fuckin lizards.

peace.

who are u?

[MOFF G]

LINK REMOVED/?1yh12nbo5t0   MOFF G - THE REVELATION prod. Warlord.

this beat was dun by my boy, WARLORD, a producer, an emcee and mi friend. the track was meant for a different project which neva got off the ground.

i've been recording my rehearsals, choosing beats for my upcoming mixtape CYBER CIPHER. so feed on the quality of sound as well as how u receive the G's flow.

so here goes a lil sum for ya ears.1

[krimzin]

Wusup with this berry puss?

[MOFF G]

Wusup with this berry puss?

let us not entertain dat ish nd end up derailing the thread......DAMN!

[Psyklone]

I listened to "Trapped behind Bars". Maybe I'm deaf mara I thought the sound quality was not that bad. The lyricism, beat and delivery is nothing amazing though, just standard which is not a bad thing, I'm letting the track take up the little memory on my PC.

Eyo Don, thanks for da feed broh, much appreciated and yes...will put more effort on delivery, lyricism et al.

One!

[Psyklone]

LINK REMOVED/?1yh12nbo5t0   MOFF G - THE REVELATION prod. Warlord.

this beat was dun by my boy, WARLORD, a producer, an emcee and mi friend. the track was meant for a different project which neva got off the ground.

i've been recording my rehearsals, choosing beats for my upcoming mixtape CYBER CIPHER. so feed on the quality of sound as well as how u receive the G's flow.

so here goes a lil sum for ya ears.1

Downloaded will give feed tomorrow or so!

[MOFF G]

yo Psy: shit son, u gots the flow, but ya'll still have to get sum equips, the quality is just as poor.
the beat on trapped behing bars is dope, but the 1st dude rides it like he shook or sum. no hate.

i digs it man, keep us posted on new ish u workin on.

[Psyklone]

yo Psy: shit son, u gots the flow, but ya'll still have to get sum equips, the quality is just as poor.
the beat on trapped behing bars is dope, but the 1st dude rides it like he shook or sum. no hate.

i digs it man, keep us posted on new ish u workin on.

Peace fam!

Thanks for da feed much appreciated! Lol @ what is that makes ma mans Salvage sound like he's shook?
Concerning equipment...you damn right we are planning to buy a mic, filter & stand. We are also having a bit of a challenge about COOL EDIT not being able to run on a few operating systems (what do you cats use to master your tacks?).

I listened to your joint, Revelation. The lyrics are tight but obviously influenced by the sequence of the beat of which your mans I think he really needs to up his game. Please up more sh!t if you can.

Ps you can hear more of our tracks here: http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/2495454