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Title: (No Longer)
Post by: GreenBat on March 17, 2007, 06:35:05 PM

No longer she says;Will she be a doormat for
your insecurities.
The burden of your self-doubt weighs much too
heavy on her.
The demands you place on her she has no wish
to meet.
So she denies you the very thing you prize most
and you;"Sir"are a coward for forcefully taking it
from her.
She feels not only loneliness and heartache but
also pain and utter despair.
And it's unfair how the man of her dreams has her
going through a nightmare.
Her initial feelings of adoration,love and total
commitment were short lived and were replaced
smartly by loathing,hate and flat out disconnection.
You believe her subscription to feminine publications
calling us "Pigs" to be fiction.
You are adament her position should remain inside
a kitchen.
O silly little man murdering her spirit was easier said
than done.
She has outgrown you;She now sees to her needs
first,while yours is secondary at best.
No longer she says will she buckle under the stress.
You're left stagnant and confused even her bruises are
through with you.
She will make it on her own 'cause she wants nothing
to do with you.

Title: (No Longer)
Post by: Beloe on March 17, 2007, 07:55:02 PM

Get tha sand out ur vagina dude!

Title: (No Longer)
Post by: BHLAKHROZE on March 21, 2007, 12:05:45 PM

^^^ perhaps you should take your own advice.

greenbat jo. you write. and write. and its like no one ever says anything. when what i want to say is dont stop.

Title: (No Longer)
Post by: crus-ou on March 21, 2007, 12:18:03 PM

Hello Greenbat -

hope to be reading more from you...  :wink:

Title: (No Longer)
Post by: BHLAKHROZE on March 21, 2007, 12:26:51 PM

you aswell crus ou...hope to be reading you. more from you. of you.

you aswell.

Title: Thanx Thanx Thanx
Post by: GreenBat on April 13, 2007, 12:36:14 PM

First off Dude there's no sand anywhere where i'm standing.Pity you feel the way you do i could be telling your mammas or sisters story and they will at least have a voice.To the who gave me such positive feed back thank u I appreciate every kind sentiment.Sorry i am so late in responding but they do say better late.

Title: Re: Thanx Thanx Thanx
Post by: BHLAKHROZE on April 13, 2007, 03:23:48 PM

Quote from: "GreenBat"

i could be telling your mammas or sisters story and they will at least have a voice.

To the who gave me such positive feed back thank u I appreciate every kind sentiment.Sorry i am so late in responding but they do say better late

yes indeed you could be. you could even be telling mine you know. so thank YOU. for just feeling the need. you dont have to. youre saying something there. i dont know where it comes from. but you are saying something there bra.