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Hip Hop Forums => Chief Rocka - Open Mic => Topic started by: Mad on October 14, 2008, 05:44:39 PM
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hip hop doesnt always have to be gangsta, and now its time to switch lanes
just post your saddest but romantic rhymes dedicated to a chick that once broke your heart, or just someone you just broke up with........
im coming after you. just 10lines
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she was everything i ever had/
she gave me her heart and she was good in bed/
no one can never have what we had/
never thought it could ever end so said/
i coulndt stop looking at her tits when she touched my ribs/
and i couldnt forget the sweetest taste of her pink lips/
up until he phoned me and told me to live her alone/
i swore to god i wanted to brake his bones/
but the situation got out of controll/
saying she loves him and she cant see me anymore/
her love was everything special my heart ever owened/
so she left me all alone/
he said baby the plane is living soon, we got to go/
time was up before i could let her know/
dont mind the lines, just post any number of barz
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she was everything i ever had/
she gave me her heart and she was good in bed/
no one can never have what we had/
never thought it could ever end so said/
i coulndt stop looking at her tits when she touched my ribs/
and i couldnt forget the sweetest taste of her pink lips/
up until he phoned me and told me to live her alone/
i swore to god i wanted to brake his bones/
but the situation got out of controll/
saying she loves him and she cant see me anymore/
her love was everything special my heart ever owened/
so she left me all alone/
he said baby the plane is living soon, we got to go/
time was up before i could let her know/
dont mind the lines, just post any number of barz
Dis is some mo' gay shit
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I guess to some people writing a piece about/to a girl seems gay. What a shame, gone are the days when men were men and sheep were scared neh.
::) Double standards i see
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I guess to some people writing a piece about/to a girl seems gay. What a shame, gone are the days when men were men and sheep were scared neh.
::) Double standards i see
you know ruthless
z digital is something to be ignored, i guess he is one of those fools that have never ever fallen deeply in love to a woman.
i have ran into many jerks who think being emotional is a weakness.
@ ruth man why you aint posting more of that dope shit you got, you dope i enjoyed your frees.
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she was everything i ever had/
she gave me her heart and she was good in bed/
no one can never have what we had/
never thought it could ever end so said/
i coulndt stop looking at her tits when she touched my ribs/
and i couldnt forget the sweetest taste of her pink lips/
up until he phoned me and told me to live her alone/
i swore to god i wanted to brake his bones/
but the situation got out of controll/
saying she loves him and she cant see me anymore/
her love was everything special my heart ever owened/
so she left me all alone/
he said baby the plane is living soon, we got to go/
time was up before i could let her know/
dont mind the lines, just post any number of barz
Dis is some mo' gay shit
You are wrong. This is not 'some mo' gay shit'... This is 'some mo' gay and WACK shit'....
Very, very, very, very very very basic line construction and grade R vocab used...
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so is this the MTN call center girl? did u at least get some free airtime for all your trouble?
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you are both wrong, very wrong
its kind of a dissapointment and embarrasing to have two adult people criticising the fact that one shows off his emotion side. im confused i never thought that being emotional is gay or homo. i guess we live in separate worlds then
but what im sure off i belong in the normal world where everyone has a right to be emotional and cry. men have a tendency of fooling theirselves thinking that its embara**ing if a men cries. that is total bullshit. crying doesnt mean you weak or you are powerfless as you retards put it, it simply means you are hurt just like any normal human being and you feel like crying the pain out, no wonder why we have men committing suicide and killing their families on the scene
its because you keep your pain to yourselves and you dont want to break it out. you allow it to dig you up and brake your whole life apart which also means forcing you to take innocent lives of the people you created, your own children
why do we have to be jerks? yes men were born with power to controll earth and the life on earth but god never said men must not cry
crying is okay and it helps to relieve whatever pain you are in. if being emotional is a weakness in the human life, then about 95% of people on eart including god himself are weak.
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you know ruthless
z digital is something to be ignored, i guess he is one of those fools that have never ever fallen deeply in love to a woman.
i have ran into many jerks who think being emotional is a weakness.
@ ruth man why you aint posting more of that dope shit you got, you dope i enjoyed your frees.
Wow thanx mad, glad to know sum1 liked it... guess i stopped coz most people didnt understand a freestyle written at that moment with pre written stuff...
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Remember when Raper said he hugs his friends when they come visit him and afterwards they hold hands for at least three minutes?
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you know ruthless
z digital is something to be ignored, i guess he is one of those fools that have never ever fallen deeply in love to a woman.
i have ran into many jerks who think being emotional is a weakness.
@ ruth man why you aint posting more of that dope shit you got, you dope i enjoyed your frees.
Wow thanx mad, glad to know sum1 liked it... guess i stopped coz most people didnt understand a freestyle written at that moment with pre written stuff...
well its cool man even though im not getting exactley what you saying, but its cool your frees were dope as f***
rembember when i introduced a friend of mine to ag, we logged into chief rocka and went on the gimme a word and torque the talk or somethin thread, we read some of the posts there and checked some few posts of yours, dude was scared as f*** to join the ag freestyling family, he couldnt close his mouth, the way you and na 187 were kicking it was crazy
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she was everything i ever had/
she gave me her heart and she was good in bed/
no one can never have what we had/
never thought it could ever end so said/
i coulndt stop looking at her tits when she touched my ribs/
and i couldnt forget the sweetest taste of her pink lips/
up until he phoned me and told me to live her alone/
i swore to god i wanted to brake his bones/
but the situation got out of controll/
saying she loves him and she cant see me anymore/
her love was everything special my heart ever owened/
so she left me all alone/
he said baby the plane is living soon, we got to go/
time was up before i could let her know/
dont mind the lines, just post any number of barz
Dis is some mo' gay shit
You are wrong. This is not 'some mo' gay shit'... This is 'some mo' gay and WACK shit'....
Very, very, very, very very very basic line construction and grade R vocab used...
THE main reason why this is some mo gay and WACK SHIT is coz it was written by you & we all know that you (MAD) is one phuqed up nigga....
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I guess to some people writing a piece about/to a girl seems gay. What a shame, gone are the days when men were men and sheep were scared neh.
::) Double standards i see
Dude when it comes to MAD rapper I think errbody got double standards.....his opening post I reluctantly support but his post thereof was as I said some mo' gay shit. For real homez, cant take this clown seriously..................Just read some of the rediculous shit this redundent imbacile writes.
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you know ruthless
z digital is something to be ignored, i guess he is one of those fools that have never ever fallen deeply in love to a woman.
i have ran into many jerks who think being emotional is a weakness.
@ ruth man why you aint posting more of that dope shit you got, you dope i enjoyed your frees.
Wow thanx mad, glad to know sum1 liked it... guess i stopped coz most people didnt understand a freestyle written at that moment with pre written stuff...
I actually liked it too. You are nice, cant hold that from you.
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I guess to some people writing a piece about/to a girl seems gay. What a shame, gone are the days when men were men and sheep were scared neh.
::) Double standards i see
Mad rapper is the same clown who wrote some shit about being rapped in the a** and loving it.....now hes writing about love & you expect peeps to take him seriously, IF you know about that post then I think your the one with double standards......I keeps true to mine I love my femalels and I have no issues about appreciating them through GOOD lyricism no sappy baby come back shit either.
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you are both wrong, very wrong
its kind of a dissapointment and embarrasing to have two adult people criticising the fact that one shows off his emotion side. im confused i never thought that being emotional is gay or homo. i guess we live in separate worlds then
but what im sure off i belong in the normal world where everyone has a right to be emotional and cry. men have a tendency of fooling theirselves thinking that its embara**ing if a men cries. that is total bullshit. crying doesnt mean you weak or you are powerfless as you retards put it, it simply means you are hurt just like any normal human being and you feel like crying the pain out, no wonder why we have men committing suicide and killing their families on the scene
its because you keep your pain to yourselves and you dont want to break it out. you allow it to dig you up and brake your whole life apart which also means forcing you to take innocent lives of the people you created, your own children
why do we have to be jerks? yes men were born with power to controll earth and the life on earth but god never said men must not cry
crying is okay and it helps to relieve whatever pain you are in. if being emotional is a weakness in the human life, then about 95% of people on eart including god himself are weak.
f*** died and made you doctor Phill...........man you sound like one of them fresh outta jail niggaz tryina live correct..........this shit is cheesy.
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Remember when Raper said he hugs his friends when they come visit him and afterwards they hold hands for at least three minutes?
Enough said............................I mean this right here explains why nobody can take dude seriously.
If this thread was origionated by some one else who had better than grade R word construction it would be taken seriously.............YES IM HATING............IM HATING ON MAD RAPPER.
Dude your split persona is f***ed up. Nobodys taking you seriously.
But Ima post something just to prove that other clown wrong.
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TO THE LOVE OF MY LIFE
To the love of my life
Love you, more than I do this mic
Worship you, like christians do christ
The heartbeat to my existance
Nothing comes between us, not even the distance
Been inlove with you from the very first instance
Your the melody, and the chorus to my lifes song
I hope they play you this song when Im gone
Im empty without you, without you Im torn
Girl, no questions no second guesin
My confession, your my light my blessing
Wouldn't trade you for the wolrd
Or all the dimes in it, you my girl
My life is yours if you want it you can have it
Your the reason why I can say I live lavish
Your my one true treasure
and the lenghts of my love for you have no measure
Im prepared to untuck tools, should a man ever touch you
& I love it that I know that I can trust you
we're so young we've still got so much room
to have 5 kids
I want all my daughters to look like you
Im so in love with you
Cant express it cant explain it
These words are the best way I could paint it
Without you by my side, I've experienced what insane is
Love it when you walk no panties no bra
Showing me the sun the moon and them stars
Then its to the kissin then its to the aaaaahhhh
Girl,__ need I say more
SEE BOO, I cant see me without seeing you
so in my reflection, I always see two
I miss sayin I love you & y'saying me too
Been around the world & you have no equal
Killin me softly, your love is so lethal
You have all my reasons, but what you love me for ??
With you I aint taking no short cuts no detours
The prettiest thing I ever set my eyes on
The only woman out there Id ever cry for
Your the love of my life & the life of my love
Your the one I place no one above
My everything girl, from the air I breathe
Your the ring on my finger & everything inbetween
And when I ask you to marry me, remind me t'say please
I wanna share all your pains and your gains
Change your intials take my last name
Your the spirit in the songs I write
thats why my hooks and verses have life
I got your picture on my wall
Kiss it everyday when I wake & go to war
Y'the reason I stand tall
The reason Im fresh & the reason I ball
The backbone & the strength & why I stay strong
Girl you dont have a clue
How much, Im in love with you
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TO THE LOVE OF MY LIFE
To the love of my life
Love you, more than I do this mic
Worship you, like christians do christ
The heartbeat to my existance
Nothing comes between us, not even the distance
Been inlove with you from the very first instance
Your the melody, and the chorus to my lifes song
I hope they play you this song when Im gone
Im empty without you, without you Im torn
Girl, no questions no second guesin
My confession, your my light my blessing
Wouldn't trade you for the wolrd
Or all the dimes in it, you my girl
My life is yours if you want it you can have it
Your the reason why I can say I live lavish
Your my one true treasure
and the lenghts of my love for you have no measure
Im prepared to untuck tools, should a man ever touch you
& I love it that I know that I can trust you
we're so young we've still got so much room
to have 5 kids
I want all my daughters to look like you
Im so in love with you
Cant express it cant explain it
These words are the best way I could paint it
Without you by my side, I've experienced what insane is
Love it when you walk no panties no bra
Showing me the sun the moon and them stars
Then its to the kissin then its to the aaaaahhhh
Girl,__ need I say more
SEE BOO, I cant see me without seeing you
so in my reflection, I always see two
I miss sayin I love you & y'saying me too
Been around the world & you have no equal
Killin me softly, your love is so lethal
You have all my reasons, but what you love me for ??
With you I aint taking no short cuts no detours
The prettiest thing I ever set my eyes on
The only woman out there Id ever cry for
Your the love of my life & the life of my love
Your the one I place no one above
My everything girl, from the air I breathe
Your the ring on my finger & everything inbetween
And when I ask you to marry me, remind me t'say please
I wanna share all your pains and your gains
Change your intials take my last name
Your the spirit in the songs I write
thats why my hooks and verses have life
I got your picture on my wall
Kiss it everyday when I wake & go to war
Y'the reason I stand tall
The reason Im fresh & the reason I ball
The backbone & the strength & why I stay strong
Girl you dont have a clue
How much, Im in love with you
----------------------PRESS PAUSE------------------------------
Ayoba! Digi man you out do yourself dude...