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Hip Hop Forums => Chief Rocka - Open Mic => Topic started by: briCK on January 21, 2003, 12:25:00 AM
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wittness these weakneses
upon frequencies
frequently exploited
self annointed kings
trapping kids
in diamond rings
lazer beams
burn spleans and cause nuclear freeze.
memorys the amoury
knowledge wisdom the arsnel
tonsils ripped
out the no strill
no skills
can penetrate the forcefield
or shield
made of gold
bloodfilled
battle field
copperfields
megavolts of thunder bolt
cause spinal cord sommersault
a**ault on your vertabrae
birds of prey
swooping down on the ma**es
cla**es reunited around my axis
written 12 may 1998
;-)
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wittness these weakneses
(WITNESS IS SPELT WRONG )
upon frequencies
frequently exploited
self annointed kings
trapping kids
in diamond rings
lazer beams
burn spleans and cause nuclear freeze.
(NEVER HEARD OF A NUCLEAR FREEZE, WERE YOU REFERRING TO A NUCLEAR WINTER?)
memorys the amoury
(WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT MEAN?)
knowledge wisdom the arsnel
tonsils ripped
out the no strill
(WHAT THE HELL IS A STRILL?)
no skills
can penetrate the forcefield
or shield
(UMM SHIELD AND FORCEFIELD IS THE SAME THING INNNIT?)
made of gold
bloodfilled
(GEEZ DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO VIOLENT?)
battle field
copperfields
megavolts of thunder bolt
cause spinal cord sommersault
(i´VE YET TO SEE THIS HAPPEN BUT I WILL TAKE YOUR WORD FOR IT)
a**ault on your vertabrae
birds of prey
swooping down on the ma**es
cla**es reunited around my axis
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20-01-2003 at 16:29, Anonymous wrote:
(WITNESS IS SPELT WRONG )
damn dog its just a spelling
burn spleans and cause nuclear freeze.
(NEVER HEARD OF A NUCLEAR FREEZE, WERE YOU REFERRING TO A NUCLEAR WINTER?)
yes but to maintain my multi sylabic flow freeze
works better than winter
memorys the amoury
(WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT MEAN?)
memory is the amoury..
visual metaphor...word a**osiation
www.dictionary.com
met·a·phor ( P ) Pronunciation Key (mt-fôr, -fr)
n.
A figure of speech in which a word or phrase that ordinarily designates one thing is used to designate another, thus making an implicit comparison, as in “a sea of troubles” or “All the world´s a stage” (Shakespeare).
One thing conceived as representing another; a symbol: “Hollywood has always been an irresistible, prefabricated metaphor for the cra**, the materialistic, the shallow, and the craven” (Neal Gabler).
mem·o·ry ( P ) Pronunciation Key (mm-r)
n. pl. mem·o·ries
The mental faculty of retaining and recalling past experience.
The act or an instance of remembering; recollection: spent the afternoon lost in memory.
All that a person can remember: It hasn´t happened in my memory.
Something remembered: pleasant childhood memories.
The fact of being remembered; remembrance: dedicated to their parents´ memory.
The period of time covered by the remembrance or recollection of a person or group of persons: within the memory of humankind.
Biology. Persistent modification of behavior resulting from an animal´s experience.
Computer Science.
A unit of a computer that preserves data for retrieval.
Capacity for storing information: two gigabytes of memory.
Statistics. The set of past events affecting a given event in a stochastic process.
The capacity of a material, such as plastic or metal, to return to a previous shape after deformation.
Immunology. The ability of the immune system to respond faster and more powerfully to subsequent exposure to an antigen.
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definition too long
armoury
n 1: a collection of resources; "he dipped into his intellectual armoryto find an answer" [syn: armory, inventory] 2: all the weapons and equipment that a country has [syn: arsenal, armory] 3: a military structure where arms and ammunition and other military equipment are stored and training is given in the use of arms [syn: arsenal, armory] 4: a place where arms are manufactured [syn: armory, arsenal]
knowledge wisdom the arsnel
metaphor continued..
tonsils ripped
out the no strill
(WHAT THE HELL IS A STRILL?)
nostril typo...gee f***ing whizz
no skills
can penetrate the forcefield
or shield
(UMM SHIELD AND FORCEFIELD IS THE SAME THING INNNIT?)
yes it is
redundency sp used for emphasis of the strength ..
f***in hell
made of gold
bloodfilled
(GEEZ DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO VIOLENT?)
visual imagery..when i am on the mic it belomgs to me sorry if its to graphic
how is this b***dfilled happy?
cause spinal cord sommersault
(i´VE YET TO SEE THIS HAPPEN BUT I WILL TAKE YOUR WORD FOR IT)
no witty come back line for you there..sarcasm intrests me not
relax dog..we are all able to be a**holes and whine about shit we need not whine about but we fight the urge...
take the script for what it is feel or don´t feel it
but tryna clown me like that is just primary school like
1ez
PS SORRY I PROBABLY HAVE A LOT OF SPELLING ERRORS AND TYPOS, ITS JUST THAT I CAN´T BE BOTHERED TO DO A SPELL CHECK THIS IS NOT GRAMMER CLa** AIGHT
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nah man I´m just clowning with you.
It´s a tight verse. I´m not really feeling the content of it but I like the way it flows, coz i rhyme this off the page and it works.
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The flow works but the content is... a different story
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to briCk: You listen to too much of el-P and his crackhead crew.
to Binary: You still breathing?
Niggas wanna hear me spit, but I do´t that, I´m too ill for this site. Okay I´m a do this. I
´m gonna let my little man Ganda-Ganda kick it for you:
Gand-Ganda:
Taking advice from an emcee that SwtKid already proved to be Trenarily Divided is stupid. It´s
the blind being led by the headless. I amputate you wack rappers like rebels in Sierra Leone.
Cut your Right Arm, make you change you name to Left Fist. If you name is briCK shut up and
you´ll realise what you spit don´t make sense. Niggas claim to be living in a shack and then
rhyme about ish inter-galactic. But your sh!t aint gonna make it global, local or even
domestic. Even unyoko told you that you wack. That´s why you weren´t breastfed. You domkop you
probably thought you get Melk from you Poppa. So well all know what you dig sucking. And
Niggas like Bandile think they hot. But get missed by heat-seeking missiles. I dont´t even
have to rhyme to a**-whip these gay internet rapper styles. And I own too more shacks, one
next to the Juskei. Where I throw corpses of wack emcees like you daily.
SowetoKid: all you punks better realise, Soweto tsotsies will lynch that a**. and my little
man wrote this ish right now. Shorter than your verses, severe Damage. now tha is Fantastic.
Bandile, admit it, intwana yami iku gandile.
Hiphop Rule 3: Don´t f*** with darkies from Sotra!
..::SotraKid signing out::..
:-[
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I will be the first to agree that the content is dicy and dodgy..
but the time when i wrote this in 1998..
i was still working on getting my flow on point and in my juvinile exitement
i compromised my content greatly..
but i´m grown and graduated now and understand that mcing takes more than just a nice flow
thanks for the positive feedback
i do like EL-P..
but come on that sounds nuffin like EL-P
PEACE