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Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Anonymous on November 24, 2004, 06:40:00 PM

I have so much I want to tell you
At first the lazy shy look in your half open
And half shut eyes and eyelashes long, they curl;
And I remember them soft against my skin
At first your shy smile and connecting
With some hopelessly seductive chord in me
I have so much I want to tell when I
Ran far from you because there’s pain and I wont
Labour in vain
Have you got something to tell me?
Is she grounded and grown and somewhat all knowing?
Gnawing pain and it twists in my stomach that she’s captured
You and I’m a wisp of forgotten, barely did
I pierce into your heart, weave myself into
Your conscious not enough to become the through thread
Of memories on which you fall back
Is she calming, breeze like Durban nights and days
All the time blowing from ocean and blue and
in the heat waves
strong and sturdy of black woman real and tangible
far from mystics and crystals calling dead spirits or
white spirits and my enchanted mythical mess of religions
and unknowables that I praise
when you break bread is it her body open to you
and drunk on true wine and high on new plateaus you’ve left us
the blessed virgins who make it hard. Is it so hard
for you to tell me?
except of late working nights and tiredness and your professional burdens and commitments so you can be Dr. So and So. is that all you have to tell me?

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: BHLAKHROZE on November 24, 2004, 07:25:00 PM

Eish...

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: blaqsouljah on November 24, 2004, 07:31:00 PM

**** beautiful... ****

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Anonymous on November 24, 2004, 07:38:00 PM

Quote:

**** beautiful... ****

thanks, first try...

now should i send it to guy in question?

or i´ll just seem desperate... ah!!!!

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Naturelle on November 24, 2004, 07:41:00 PM

no desperation reflected in that piece at all.
If you think he will see the questions you are asking with this.
i say go rite ahead.

good stuff.

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Anonymous on November 24, 2004, 07:43:00 PM

i meant i´m glad its beautfiul on the first attempt, without actually thinking too much about the words and re-writing...

i guess i wrote it for me, not to send it. why wont men just tell you its over, no hope with no evasiveness, no confusion... :-[

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: BHLAKHROZE on November 24, 2004, 07:46:00 PM

I hope he receives it.
You know how dudes do, next thing he has no idea what u talkin bout, doesnt understand what it means etc etc - im sure you know how it is.

This makes me feel hollow...
He is quite loved yo.
Its real sista gal

good luck dude.

Log on already...

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Anonymous on November 24, 2004, 08:02:00 PM

 :-Y  :-Y  :-Y   SOME SICKO JUST PUT A pron LINK ON THIS FORUM. HOW SICK! SOME OF US ARE USING PUBLIC LABS YOU KNOW. PEOPLE WILL THINK WE´RE SICK OR SOMETHING. HOW GROSS. AHHHHHH!!!!!!! :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-Y  :-Y  :-Y

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: norman_bates on November 24, 2004, 08:24:00 PM

 :-Y  :-Y  :-Y IRGENDEIN SICKO SETZTE GERADE Eine pron-VERBINDUNG AUF DIESES FORUM.  WIE KRANKER!  ETWAS VON US BENUTZEN ALLGEMEINE LABORS, DIE SIE KENNEN.  LEUTE DENKEN, Da** WIR KRANK ODER ETWAS SIND.  WIE GROB.  AHHHHHH-!!!!!!! :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-Y  :-Y  :-Y

:-]

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Anonymous on November 24, 2004, 08:27:00 PM

Norman your german translation seems a bit dodgy in places.
Did you perchance employ the services of Translator at Thesaurus.com?

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: norman_bates on November 24, 2004, 08:33:00 PM

flunked german in my first year of international studies - i was told that contextually i suck. go figure! :-]

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: OB1-Kanobe on November 24, 2004, 09:03:00 PM

to the author of this thread, hello. :-P

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: gin-i-grindith on November 25, 2004, 08:03:00 AM

Faggot poetry f***S eat a dick! Just put yourself on the line and jump, do us all a f***ing favour!
Oh it´s so beautiful f*** ME! Wankers!!! Head Rap bitches never get dick because they prefer munching rugs. DYKES!!!!

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Original Syn on November 25, 2004, 10:56:00 AM

 :-o Testy, testy.......... Calmate` cabrone.
life is to short to be that distressed bout sum1 elses luv issues. Its a shame, if u´d like to help out of the goodnes, go apeshit, but uddawise, holmes, hwy provoke the hernia.

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Original Syn on November 25, 2004, 10:59:00 AM

B-sides, wat da hell rong wit lesbians? Personally, and i KNOW this is a sentiment shared by many o my bruthas here, two ladies enjoyin each others company is great. Especially if they got a video camera (I´ve heard) ;-)

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Original Syn on November 25, 2004, 11:04:00 AM

And gini, since I a**ume u is the emcee guy and not sum kid who took his name, u know RAP is Rhythm And POETRY :-W  Rite?
Like Com Sense sed, "If I dont like it I donnt Like it, that dont mean that I´m hatin..."

But then agen, most newbies to the site go for the aggro vibe to make a statement on arrival, so beef away bra. :-?  :-Z

He is the Birth,... Cardinal Sin, The Apoka-lips, Shoalin Toast, Hate Speech... u fear what u do not understand.
YA KAHN TES DE BES, SEEN!


[ This message was edited by: syntactic on 25-11-2004 04:06 ]

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: MaddStone on November 25, 2004, 06:40:00 PM

Hey, Norm´s german may be dodgy in some places, but then again, isnt he a dodgy character anyways.Thats why he´s loved by many, and hated by all.......or is it the other way around?

Nah, just kidding.Norm, u the ou cuz.

Yeah, I think its pretty cool the whole poetry vibe and all.U got the gift or "gab" or something to that effect.First step has been taken.Now u know we expecting to see more from u and ur work hey. ;-)

Word to Syntactic......nice Common quote.One of the favs.As for Gini......if it is the emcee, then I think he should stop hating and start respecting.Always remember, one´s work isnt the begin all end all of this here supposed fad.Dont make unnecessary enemies just to become the world´s biggest enema.If u were born one, then thats just ur gift I guess.If not, take a chill pill and relax cuz.Aggro is gonna slow u down.

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: BHLAKHROZE on November 25, 2004, 06:44:00 PM

" Hey, Norm´s german may be dodgy in some places, but then again, isnt he a dodgy character anyways.Thats why he´s loved by many, and hated by all.......or is it the other way around? "

Thats why they call you Maddstone... :-]  :-]  :-]

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: digabledust on November 25, 2004, 10:03:00 PM

Yo forget the BASTARD no words of advise
but
IM ALIVE!!!!!!

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: iLL_eG0_AL13n on November 26, 2004, 04:57:00 AM

yo ´poet-head´ gurl u should know better than to send whiney poems to ´irresponsible´ lovers... shit has proved to NOT work in this century... any str8 guy in their right state of mind will not help but chuckle a lil bit if not burst out laughin upon being subjected to such a time wastin stunt... then like blahkrose said he´d probably be like: "whatchoo talkin about shawty? where´s food anyway?"
tho´ it might sound mean, i only mean this in good way, if u´re oh so miserable, pack ur shit n dump his bad a** already!!!
hum... let me guess...: *in girly voice* "But i love him!!!!"
damn! i feel like a genius...

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: mulmens on November 26, 2004, 05:16:00 AM

Who ever u r keep that talent pumping!!!

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Sunshine on November 26, 2004, 10:57:00 PM

I´m owning up to starting this thread...

whatever gin i grindith

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: Sunshine on November 26, 2004, 11:04:00 PM

Quote:

yo ´poet-head´ gurl u should know better than to send whiney poems to ´irresponsible´ lovers... shit has proved to NOT work in this century... any str8 guy in their right state of mind will not help but chuckle a lil bit if not burst out laughin upon being subjected to such a time wastin stunt... then like blahkrose said he´d probably be like: "whatchoo talkin about shawty? where´s food anyway?" tho´ it might sound mean, i only mean this in good way, if u´re oh so miserable, pack ur shit n dump his bad a** already!!! hum... let me guess...: *in girly voice* "But i love him!!!!" damn! i feel like a genius...

yeah believe me i am well acquainted with the short memory of some men and the well rehearsed look of confusion they give you.
so, im not about to embarra** myself

Title: JUST DUMP ME ALREADY!
Post by: GwaZa on January 18, 2005, 11:39:00 PM

Sunshine? Stuffed yellow toy animals? Poems of the lovelorn? You really are soppy, aren´t you? Romantic-pedantic-agnostic-bad-sophist.

This thread has been entertaining tho.

norman bates - legend!! (dodgy as it may be)

"´whatchoo talkin about shawty? where´s food anyway?´" - legend!!!

gini grindith(a**uming it is the real one) - legend!!!! (not for this but just generally)