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« on: December 09, 2009, 11:33:11 AM »
Excuse me... I got 2 pieces id like to get feedback on.
Talk about social awareness, the notion scares us/ we got bottles of reality but the potion dares us/ the way it stares at us, you a bitch/ if you sacred to gobble it down 4 a taste of that real shit/ my stanzas come quick, could knock u off balance/ could force feed you truth with the hip hop apparatus/ cos we sacrifice our lives 4 a life thats affordable/ aint got no money so your lifestyles horrible/ can't f*** wit government so your not audible/ you wanna get support but your clause not plausable/ keep pushing your silent revolution/ as i keep fighting these violent institutions/ moving my truth wit minor distribution/ cos only raps bout bitches and swag get the highest retribution.
And...
Sometimes i think about after we stop the fighting/ they gave tik to the coloureds now we not just typing/ they influence interest hiking, and food pricing/ they strike like lightning and have nice things/ from your ride to the ad replaying in your mind/ nevermind the music vids that take up your time/ that influence your style, your grind and your rhymes/ you could just say that its fine, find out that you strive 4 nothing but money/ n keep thinkin this shit's funny/ when your buddy is expecting to probably get lucky/ with your lovely hunny, puttin it deep into her tummy/ leavin adultery 4 her n leavin you blood hungry/ cos the media suggests that society destress with each others happiness/ oh yes, and mine too/ so i also gotta rhyme too/ 2 define truth is my mission to you.
How is it? Honestly? Tx.