Your hooks need serious work. I'm not hearing anything that makes me sit up and take notice. Particularly on tracks like Rise of a King - what are you telling me here? It's just not that much fun to listen. It's as if you took all the elements of a good hip-hop track and did a paint-by-numbers job.
thats borderline hatin right there!!!!!!!
*Sigh*
Mate, as an MC if you can't take constructive criticism you're in the wrong business. It wasn't hate - just genuine feelings about the track. You're right, ROAK was self-explanatory; it just wasn't a very well-constructed hook.
dog! that was a mixtape track! not a track i wud use as a single or somethin! how u gon dissect hooks now! i freestyled that hook man!!!! its that mixtape shit!!!!!
"everybody in the club get tipsy" - thats a good hook
"pac used to do one line hooks!" those were damn good hooks!
prokid did " u know what that means....MOVE! thats a hook right there alone!...and that was for his single!!!! since when were hooks a science!
but i understand what u sayin tho! its not a killer catchy hook! that wasnt the intention!
the purpose of that hook was to vent out my feelings and glue together the general concept of the whole track!!! which i think it did convincingly!
dont come in talkin shit about "the hook isnt well constructed" CMON dog! thats foul and u know it! what u gon analyse next? my breathe control? adlibs? cmon man!!!!
but the rest of the stuff u said was legit! i took it as constructive!
thats why i said " borderline hating!" - the hook and the MORE Ba** statements werent constructive! they was jus "borderline hatin"! jus negative comments!!!!! baseless!
