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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #60 on: June 17, 2008, 04:58:03 PM »
true.....

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #61 on: June 17, 2008, 05:19:47 PM »
k really old but hey why not.....

There were three of us today.

Never really got her name.
When I turned around to kiss him goodnight, he was kissing her goodnight instead.
The double bed felt small today.
I slept on the edge, clung onto the sheets because today it was the only thing that cared.
He had his back to me today; when I snuck a peek over his shoulder he was pushing her hair away from her eyes and behind her ears.
They looked happy together and there was no space for me in their perfect world.
He made breakfast in bed today and it was my favourite too.
Muesli, Bulgarian yoghurt and the right amount of syrup.
I sat up to give him a kiss, thatís when I noticed that there were only two bowls on the tray.
I heard the bath run today, the steam flowed from the bathroom straight into the bedroom.
The mist was heavy but not heavy enough to cover the silhouette of him undressing her. 
He threw her black silk bra on the bed today and it landed on top of my wet pillow.
I had to undress myself today and I didnít know where to place his Darkie t-shirt.
I never had to put it away before because usually he undressed me.
It was time to go and he stood with the door open. I rushed out but when I got there it slammed shut in my face.
While we stood on opposite sides of the door he blew her a kiss.
He doesnít know that I know, but I heard it land on her heart.
There were three of us today.
While I walked behind them to the train station I realised that no one missed me today.
There was no ticket for me today, someone else had first priority.
There was no hand holding mine today, dragging me so I wouldnít miss the train.
His hands were holding hers and mine were left to fiddle with a past that I seamed to have lost.
I stumbled alone today trying to avoid a fall.
But it was then that I realised that my lips were already kissing the concrete floor.
We reached his stop today, when I leaned forward for a goodbye kiss I noticed that something
was amiss then I realised that I was the only one sitting there.
I looked out the window today but there was no one staring back.
No one waving goodbye because today his arms were draped around her size 28 waist.
I thought the train was moving too fast today, everything was such a blur,
but when I put my finger on my chin I realised the train was dead still.
There were three of us today.
Wish I got her name. Iíd so kindly ask her to return what was once mine.




Nice... good thing it left hey. Alot of emotion in it- channeled in the right direction. nICE

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #62 on: June 18, 2008, 09:27:33 AM »
THE DAY I FORCEFULLY BECAME A WOMEN
Taken like a green peach off a tree/
why me?/
As he sinks his teeth IN ME/
Sqweezzing the lil life out of me, me the unrype peach :'(/

How could I allow him to pick on, at and in me?
I let him teast me , all of me.
I cry bitter juice/

My vigina, no the peach is no longer attached to the tree so it's loose/
Once I had 100% pure juice /
As I lay next to the tree/
The ants all take advantage of me/

No where to turn/
No one to trust/

He had his way with the peach and so have the f***en ants/
Now only a pip remains/
Hard as a fcken rock/

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #63 on: June 18, 2008, 03:48:32 PM »
THE DAY I FORCEFULLY BECAME A WOMEN
Taken like a green peach off a tree/
why me?/
As he sinks his teeth IN ME/
Sqweezzing the lil life out of me, me the unrype peach :'(/

How could I allow him to pick on, at and in me?
I let him teast me , all of me.
I cry bitter juice/

My vigina, no the peach is no longer attached to the tree so it's loose/
Once I had 100% pure juice /
As I lay next to the tree/
The ants all take advantage of me/

No where to turn/
No one to trust/

He had his way with the peach and so have the f***en ants/
Now only a pip remains/
Hard as a fcken rock/

From a males point of view: That some funny ish right there. If it's what I think it is thou
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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #64 on: June 19, 2008, 02:52:03 PM »
THE DAY I FORCEFULLY BECAME A WOMEN
Taken like a green peach off a tree/
why me?/
As he sinks his teeth IN ME/
Sqweezzing the lil life out of me, me the unrype peach :'(/

How could I allow him to pick on, at and in me?
I let him teast me , all of me.
I cry bitter juice/

My vigina, no the peach is no longer attached to the tree so it's loose/
Once I had 100% pure juice /
As I lay next to the tree/
The ants all take advantage of me/

No where to turn/
No one to trust/

He had his way with the peach and so have the f***en ants/
Now only a pip remains/
Hard as a fcken rock/

haai love that was hectic :o
mind is what im made of
where my spoken word is formed
lie not for this here is what mind is

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #65 on: June 23, 2008, 08:40:08 AM »
Seeing old friends.

Hey Heartache there you are.
Never thought I 'd see you again.
To be honest can't say I missed you.
But now that you here there's no place I'd rather be.

I see you brought Loneliness and Disappointment.
It's great to have you guys back.
Come in, sit down lets have a chat.
I have a lot of news to tell you.

Don't know what I was thinking really.
Making friend with Love.
I was never comfortable around him.
He made me feel warm inside.

Met this girl called Happiness.
Boy does she get around.
I think she had a thing for love.
She only came when I was with him.

I kinda liked that Hope chap.
He made me feel good sometimes.
Wish he could leave Doubt at home.
That guy gave me the creeps. 

I'm so excited you guys are back.
Almost forgot all about you.
But don't worry, I have this crazy hunch.
That you guys are gonna be here for a while.

Those guys were all about promises.
Never bothered to keep just one.
All they did was take and take.
At the end I had nothing left.

I see not much has changed.
Disappointment's is dragging tears.
Must say it' getting kinda old though.
Don't you think I have enough wet pillows?

Sit down, relax old friends.
Make yourself at home.
Nothings changed, it's still my heart.
Only this times it's now your home.



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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #66 on: June 23, 2008, 01:07:22 PM »
THE DAY I FORCEFULLY BECAME A WOMEN
Taken like a green peach off a tree/
why me?/
As he sinks his teeth IN ME/
Sqweezzing the lil life out of me, me the unrype peach :'(/

How could I allow him to pick on, at and in me?
I let him teast me , all of me.
I cry bitter juice/

My vigina, no the peach is no longer attached to the tree so it's loose/
Once I had 100% pure juice /
As I lay next to the tree/
The ants all take advantage of me/

No where to turn/
No one to trust/

He had his way with the peach and so have the f***en ants/
Now only a pip remains/
Hard as a fcken rock/

From a males point of view: That some funny ish right there. If it's what I think it is thou
you one sick prick!

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #67 on: June 23, 2008, 01:21:33 PM »
nice one baldi, jay dats deep neh!
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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #68 on: June 24, 2008, 11:34:02 PM »
ms loks. i know the feeling. when its like you know what ne. actually. nevermind. will however is a friend who should be kept. and patience. the type to grow old with.

thank you for that :)


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in the elongated silences that constitute my prayer
there is distance between me and the world
my tenderness it is a place within me that has grown hoarse
it becomes this ancient tongue that is forgotten to me
and where there was once resistance
now instead i bend

the art of allowing

broken in so many places
that none dares have the hands to mend
charred with the memory of those who did not know how. my body is scarred.
they engraved me with their fears
but the pain becomes my inspiration and i cannot curse it
they leave me weak
and make me strong

I write. and I give back to myself.
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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #69 on: June 25, 2008, 10:26:34 AM »
THE DAY I FORCEFULLY BECAME A WOMEN
Taken like a green peach off a tree/
why me?/
As he sinks his teeth IN ME/
Sqweezzing the lil life out of me, me the unrype peach :'(/

How could I allow him to pick on, at and in me?
I let him teast me , all of me.
I cry bitter juice/

My vigina, no the peach is no longer attached to the tree so it's loose/
Once I had 100% pure juice /
As I lay next to the tree/
The ants all take advantage of me/

No where to turn/
No one to trust/

He had his way with the peach and so have the f***en ants/
Now only a pip remains/
Hard as a fcken rock/

From a males point of view: That some funny ish right there. If it's what I think it is thou
you one sick prick!

Then why do u call it a poem? Cos that's how I interpreted it at first. No offence was intended with that.  However, we all have our own opinions about each other.
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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #70 on: July 02, 2008, 11:13:03 AM »
They say you have pretty eyes

They say you have pretty eyes
Wonder if you were looking at her when you stuck a pair of scissors in her chest
They say you make the boys go LOCO
Itís a wonder you never went LOCO after what you did
Tough little cookie we are ne!
I have never seen you but know of you or rather what you are capable of
I know enough to dub you a heartless bitch
That night you didnít only take one life but two because your victim was with child
You left a void in the hearts of many
So forgive me for calling you a bitch because I couldnít think of a better word
Those in the know would say murderer but Iíll just call you bitch
Wadup bitch?
I now have a twelve year old sister
She was my niece three years ago before you took her mother from her
She never had a chance to meet her unborn brother or sister because you took that away from her
Bright little spark she is but her mother never saw her shine
Because you stuck a pair of scissors in her chest
And for all this you get ten months in prison
WOW!!! >:(
« Last Edit: July 02, 2008, 11:23:00 AM by Eva High »

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #71 on: July 02, 2008, 11:22:21 AM »
Pain

It is painfull that thing,
It hurts.

Thank you.
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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #72 on: July 02, 2008, 11:38:29 AM »
Pain

It is painfull that thing,
It hurts.

Thank you.

Whats even more painful is actually getting used to that feeling.

@ Eva High....  :'( :'( :'(

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #73 on: July 02, 2008, 11:42:36 AM »
They say you have pretty eyes

They say you have pretty eyes
Wonder if you were looking at her when you stuck a pair of scissors in her chest
They say you make the boys go LOCO
It’s a wonder you never went LOCO after what you did
Tough little cookie we are ne!
I have never seen you but know of you or rather what you are capable of
I know enough to dub you a heartless bitch
That night you didn’t only take one life but two because your victim was with child
You left a void in the hearts of many
So forgive me for calling you a bitch because I couldn’t think of a better word
Those in the know would say murderer but I’ll just call you bitch
Wadup bitch?
I now have a twelve year old sister
She was my niece three years ago before you took her mother from her
She never had a chance to meet her unborn brother or sister because you took that away from her
Bright little spark she is but her mother never saw her shine
Because you stuck a pair of scissors in her chest
And for all this you get ten months in prison
WOW!!! >:(

This is sad yo.
iv got a fire in my heart and your critism fans it!

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Re: poets corner 14 ( relapses or corpses)
« Reply #74 on: July 02, 2008, 12:57:36 PM »
They say you have pretty eyes

They say you have pretty eyes
Wonder if you were looking at her when you stuck a pair of scissors in her chest
They say you make the boys go LOCO
Itís a wonder you never went LOCO after what you did
Tough little cookie we are ne!
I have never seen you but know of you or rather what you are capable of
I know enough to dub you a heartless bitch
That night you didnít only take one life but two because your victim was with child
You left a void in the hearts of many
So forgive me for calling you a bitch because I couldnít think of a better word
Those in the know would say murderer but Iíll just call you bitch
Wadup bitch?
I now have a twelve year old sister
She was my niece three years ago before you took her mother from her
She never had a chance to meet her unborn brother or sister because you took that away from her
Bright little spark she is but her mother never saw her shine
Because you stuck a pair of scissors in her chest
And for all this you get ten months in prison
WOW!!! >:(

This is sad yo.

what is sad is the fact that the family is too broke to appeal