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I have so much I want to tell you
At first the lazy shy look in your half open
And half shut eyes and eyelashes long, they curl;
And I remember them soft against my skin
At first your shy smile and connecting
With some hopelessly seductive chord in me
I have so much I want to tell when I
Ran far from you because there’s pain and I wont
Labour in vain
Have you got something to tell me?
Is she grounded and grown and somewhat all knowing?
Gnawing pain and it twists in my stomach that she’s captured
You and I’m a wisp of forgotten, barely did
I pierce into your heart, weave myself into
Your conscious not enough to become the through thread
Of memories on which you fall back
Is she calming, breeze like Durban nights and days
All the time blowing from ocean and blue and
in the heat waves
strong and sturdy of black woman real and tangible
far from mystics and crystals calling dead spirits or
white spirits and my enchanted mythical mess of religions
and unknowables that I praise
when you break bread is it her body open to you
and drunk on true wine and high on new plateaus you’ve left us
the blessed virgins who make it hard. Is it so hard
for you to tell me?
except of late working nights and tiredness and your professional burdens and commitments so you can be Dr. So and So. is that all you have to tell me?



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Eish...
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**** beautiful... ****
My parents said i could be whatever i wanted, so i chose to become an a**hole


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Quote:
**** beautiful... ****



thanks, first try...

now should i send it to guy in question?

or i´ll just seem desperate... ah!!!!


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no desperation reflected in that piece at all.
If you think he will see the questions you are asking with this.
i say go rite ahead.

good stuff.


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i meant i´m glad its beautfiul on the first attempt, without actually thinking too much about the words and re-writing...

i guess i wrote it for me, not to send it. why wont men just tell you its over, no hope with no evasiveness, no confusion... :-[


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I hope he receives it.
You know how dudes do, next thing he has no idea what u talkin bout, doesnt understand what it means etc etc - im sure you know how it is.

This makes me feel hollow...
He is quite loved yo.
Its real sista gal

good luck dude.

Log on already...
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 :-Y  :-Y  :-Y   SOME SICKO JUST PUT A pron LINK ON THIS FORUM. HOW SICK! SOME OF US ARE USING PUBLIC LABS YOU KNOW. PEOPLE WILL THINK WE´RE SICK OR SOMETHING. HOW GROSS. AHHHHHH!!!!!!! :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-Y  :-Y  :-Y


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 :-Y  :-Y  :-Y IRGENDEIN SICKO SETZTE GERADE Eine pron-VERBINDUNG AUF DIESES FORUM.  WIE KRANKER!  ETWAS VON US BENUTZEN ALLGEMEINE LABORS, DIE SIE KENNEN.  LEUTE DENKEN, Da** WIR KRANK ODER ETWAS SIND.  WIE GROB.  AHHHHHH-!!!!!!! :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-|  :-Y  :-Y  :-Y

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What goes up . . . better doggone well stay up!"


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Norman your german translation seems a bit dodgy in places.
Did you perchance employ the services of Translator at Thesaurus.com?


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flunked german in my first year of international studies - i was told that contextually i suck. go figure! :-]
What goes up . . . better doggone well stay up!"


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to the author of this thread, hello. :-P
any of the truths that we cling to depend on our point of view.


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Faggot poetry f***S eat a dick! Just put yourself on the line and jump, do us all a f***ing favour!
Oh it´s so beautiful f*** ME! Wankers!!! Head Rap bitches never get dick because they prefer munching rugs. DYKES!!!!


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 :-o Testy, testy.......... Calmate` cabrone.
life is to short to be that distressed bout sum1 elses luv issues. Its a shame, if u´d like to help out of the goodnes, go apeshit, but uddawise, holmes, hwy provoke the hernia.
NOBODY TELLS ME I'M COOL, HARD TO TALK WHEN YO TEETH CHATTERING.


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B-sides, wat da hell rong wit lesbians? Personally, and i KNOW this is a sentiment shared by many o my bruthas here, two ladies enjoyin each others company is great. Especially if they got a video camera (I´ve heard) ;-)
NOBODY TELLS ME I'M COOL, HARD TO TALK WHEN YO TEETH CHATTERING.