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Yo,

if  of u would please give me an opion on my work I would highly app. it.
thanks for your time the effert show you care a bit.
don´t back of now,
give me yo word.

Dawg Out.8-)
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Hello folks
That was exceptional. If anything I think you should go professional. I recommend that you look into being a rap artist as a career but I think you need to work on your spelling dog is spelt D-O-G not D-A-W-G. If you are wondering how to check your spelling it is the F7 key on the keyboard. Just trying to empower our young black South Africans to reach their full potential. This is a great website this Africa’s Gateway, does it stand for Africa’s gateway to success? HA HA HA …
Any way I’ll be on my way now

Cheerio chaps.
:-o


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oK. U sorta askin da rong poerson cos like im a beginner. but on da real just read what brick said to me cos i think basically dats wat u need to know. First off get ur verses to be either short nd powerful straight out or make em longer and let da punchlines or wateva ooze out of it slowly.

Dats it i guess
mo :-D
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Hello folks
That was exceptional. If anything I think you should go professional. I recommend that you look into being a rap artist as a career but I think you need to work on your spelling dog is spelt D-O-G not D-A-W-G. If you are wondering how to check your spelling it is the F7 key on the keyboard. Just trying to empower our young black South Africans to reach their full potential. This is a great website this Africa’s Gateway, does it stand for Africa’s gateway to success? HA HA HA …
Any way I’ll be on my way now

Cheerio chaps.
  :-o


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Yo mo I app. your word thanks.

As for you chicken head, I spell Dawg the way I spell it cause thats the way I want to! Any way who said that I am black? I am a white south african with a little talent is that so hard for you to believe?

Dawg Out.8-)
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And u wonda why people are reluctant to reply? I mean just looking at Molybdenum´s reply it seems as though she was trying to be nice. She couldn´t even give you a straight and I mean striaght answer.

Get it?  :-?


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Yo chicken.

Wat people think bout me is there prob not mine. I lived in others shadows for to long and now I am gonna break out and let the world now who I am!

Dont tell me who I am, cause you dont know me! I am the thing that sweet dreams for girls are and what the nightmares for da guy are! so back off, you never know maybe I coming after U.

Dawg Out.8-)
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Yo - TKrocks and Dark blood

You once told me that I wasn´t good enough and I thought that you should read what I am palying with. This I feel is my worst peace That I have written in the last month. I have got hundreds that are better



RE: YO LIFE
I tink you better learn,
before I let your skin burn,
dat da people I bought I taught,
so throughout dis I´ll taughnt you,
I´ll Ask even get da ghosts of yo naked past ta haughnt you.
Yo shit is wack,
I got you against the wall by yo back.
That da kid that running,
us gunning,
for da wicked a** mother,
that you tink is yo brother,
So i think you should slide,
so that you can bide,
a reason for wen you hide.
Thinking bout you make the inanimated object of my life,
Kind of like me walking down da street,
trying to find out where dis beat,
is going to push this strife.

You kind of remind me,
like the bark on a tree,
You seems to be hard,
yet you aint nothing but a piece of tard.
Yo, shit it nothing,
You read it on a wall,
You try to claim it,
just to find out,
it´s a plain bit.

so think about it,
rearange the alphabet,
maybe then you´ll be able to make some sense,
out of this dense reality,
cause you remind me of a nigger,
that wanted to get bigger,
so he dug a hole to grow himself,
Poor fool,
You aint a tree,
You cant do any harm,
your like a bee,
You can only sting once,
cause your lyrics are lying,
Their dying,
like the corpse,
who six feet under.

Dawg Out.8-)



[ This message was edited by: Dawg on 05-08-2003 14:01 ]
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Yo people please let me know what you think bout my latest post thanks. I app. dat yo people take the time to check dis stuff.

Brick, you guys are good at this shit. thanks for all da words now please tell me what you guys think thanks!

Dawg Out.8-)
ew mc with talent that needs to be taught what to do.