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on: August 16, 2005, 02:17:46 PM
I'm tired of ths simple shit so I wanna meke it more challenging

rules.
10-17 lines max
Everyline has to be a metaphor or a simile
no recyclin

**NB -If you were a retard in your english cla** please dont enter.
-if you failed english in matric please dont enter
_and please god if you still dont know what a metaphor or a simile is please dont enter









Metaphor-
a figure of speech in which an expression is used to refer to something that it does not literally denote in order to suggest a similarity
 

Simile-a figure of speech that expresses a resemblance between things of different kinds (usually formed with `like' or `as')

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Reply #1 on: August 16, 2005, 02:22:20 PM
tehehe
"retarded in english cla**"

go-go gadget rhyme-book

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Reply #2 on: August 16, 2005, 02:29:17 PM
Punch! Metaphor! wordplay!   "By your powers combined I am captain serve you a**"  8O

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Reply #3 on: August 16, 2005, 02:48:00 PM
tehe...........

twas once a frosty winter/
when her nipples started to wither/
whenever.. poems got written in cryons..deleted scriptures/
by a child  none other...no aka
coz a serve tyred rhymes like a puncture/

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Reply #4 on: August 16, 2005, 02:52:37 PM
Please dont tell me thats your sickest drop

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Reply #5 on: August 16, 2005, 02:57:43 PM
:oops:
aight then..............
lets go. :wink:



 :idea:
err umm

nah forget it.........

hey u have no imagination at all

 

"twas once a frosty winter/
when her nipples started to wither/"

get wit the language son.............. :roll:

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Reply #6 on: August 16, 2005, 03:00:43 PM
I thought this was supposed to be a battle 8O

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Reply #7 on: August 16, 2005, 03:03:12 PM
where???????????? 8O
*looks around but find no carnage happening*

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Reply #8 on: August 16, 2005, 03:27:58 PM
ahh! Sarcarsm gods last gift to mankind  :lol:  8)

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Reply #9 on: August 16, 2005, 03:37:18 PM
MAY AS WELL CHANGE THE AVVY

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Reply #10 on: August 16, 2005, 09:25:20 PM
I refrain from needing to explain the sick I obtain in my domain
Bring such a force I de-rail your jaw like trains coming off tracks
Fully packed and stacked spit words in a jet so u feel my air attack
Use the microphone to Beat u with my words an whit when I spit
Who’s this, just Rhyme-2die throwi-n-punches cause im bringing hits

Jst a Taste
u]"Nas is lyin when he says hip hop is dead, he's jst gettin old"[/u]
" Jay-Z is president so he's album is for russell simmons and LA Reid"

Now who do you listen to?

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Reply #11 on: August 17, 2005, 12:54:48 PM
^^Simpleton

Yo AG Rhymetodie's about to die today/
Your style's like 50 and g-unit members.....all gay/
Deac got his shirt drenched in more blood- than tampons/
Struggle to stand on his own as if both of his legs gone/
Got is own dick in his mouth claiming to be “HEAD-STRONG"/
little bitch before you rhymetodie say yo prayers/
You couldn’t spit a sharp line if swallowed GILLETE razors/
Drop fire optics  hotter than most tropics/
I'll make yo fall-off like Gucci stocks did in profits/
Bitch get smacked down QUICK FAST/
I'll make ya lyrical weight decrease like your flow's on slim fast/












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Reply #12 on: August 17, 2005, 01:45:20 PM
u puttin up yo post but what does it 'matter for?'
we can meet to battle after 3 like 4
i disappear like fart so u kno i'm 'rear'(rare)
my album's the next to BLOW cuz it's the 'new clear' (nuclear)
y'all like postmen on sunday noon - no delivery
beauty's skin deep mine's hidden like capillaries
tell deacon to stop biting like frost on fish fingers
me and freestyles click like mice on hyperlink markers
one of the greatest like michael like jackson like jordan
so i walk on the moon while my flows cleanse the pagan
MCs sneak like previews hiding in trailers on the internet
i'm felt like braille / when visibilty fails
bars like jails / carry Africa's future like slave ship sails
so i'm the big inning(beginning) like test cricket finals
make you scratch your head cuz yo reality's a vinyl
used to call me 'immature' till U Got Served
get it...Marques?
Chosen

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Reply #13 on: August 17, 2005, 02:13:24 PM
AHH! We like sneak attacks and double teaming cats unannounced do we!


this munesti fag couldn't SPIT fire if he CHOKED on a FLAMING HOT CHEETO/
I'm about to 'JACK' this 'SON' so bad, he'll think his new name is 'TITO'/
I SHUT DOWN this nigga flows, like he got his lyrics from NAPSTER/
He couldn't have spit any shittier 'BOO' 'BOO', if his GHOSTWRITER was CASPER/
I'll split this kids WIG, make him look like he's on CHEMO/
munetsi's UP THE WRONG CREEK, like he was trying to FIND NEMO/
On a WHO's HOT scale, This man wouldn't even be MILD/
Cuz I EXPOSED him for the PUSSY he is, like GIRLS GONE WILD/
Even you spit your rhymes from a ROOFTOP, your shit wouldn't be OVER MY HEAD/
munwtsi ur FLOWS are nowhere to be found, like a DRIED UP RIVER BED/
This kid is like Nixon, He'll be forced to give his resignation/
If he took a step in the STREETS, he'd get CLAPPED like a STANDING OVATION/
Like JIGGA I'M 'bout to ROC this cat like  DAME DASH/
Deac's sick with tha verbal word SLASH/
I'm strctly ALL OVER this kid, like a FULL BODY RASH/







NIGGA DO NOT JUMP IN ON OTHER FOLKS BATTLES UNANNOUNCED! :twisted:  :twisted:  :evil:  :evil:

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Reply #14 on: August 17, 2005, 02:22:27 PM
AND HE RUNS AWAY! *SIGH*

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