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...if god were to die today i'd be his suicide note
forget what you thought
you never meant to wear that technicolour coat
and if it's battle you after detonate those metaphors
not them loose words that come across like cheap verbal whores
you call yourself a deacon
wasn't that a boy's hole that you had your dick in?
maybe where you from being a retard is quite the rage
but here is where words lay ma**acre to an unsespecting page
you say you wanna battle
but you as harmless as a snail with a stolen rattle
my words held you rhymes for randsom
couldn't be a braveheart even if your last name was gibson...
My parents said i could be whatever i wanted, so i chose to become an a**hole


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THE MONKEY MAN KICKS a**

DONT ACT LIKE U DIDNT NO IT
IAMM OUTTA HERE
PEACE

SOULJAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol:


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WHAT IT IS POET? :wink:
My parents said i could be whatever i wanted, so i chose to become an a**hole


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quick somebody call the SPCA I'm 'bout to hurt this monkey

Lets get Face to face when our paws wreck, battling dis wussy ape is nonsense/
Couldn't be OVER THE TOP straddling spinning toy objects/
f*** arms and knees, I wreck with steez, forget winning you could only come next to me/
I about to leave this CAT BATTERED like fried chineese recipies/
I'm hip-hop's ideal, I attack your wack a** and rip up style fields/
I'll scramble your brain with a spatula, still couldnt WHIP UP ideas?/
This battle is beyond humeral/ Cut jugulars to those attending your f***ing funeral/
yuo couldn't step EYE TO EYE (I) spitting his verse in roman numerals/*wtf*
Damn how many times I gotta punch in before you get outdid/
beat ya tired shit, strictly with no doubt, bitch/
you couldn't come with a FREESTYLE if I PAID FOR YOUR OUTFIT/
dont tempt me to rip you, you'll never be shit, so i'll allow you the rebuttle/
cuz if you ever take off you'll come right back down like the CHALLENGER SHUTTLE/ *HAHAHA*

*bonus punch*
Son, shut the hell up, cus ur M utha Fucking   DOOMed/ **
like a fat guy eatin ur foot, ur 'soul' been consumed/


**the bold letters spell out mf doom

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...you're the rendition of half truths on the road to perdition
i'm far reaching like sermons of repentant demons
left you bleeding like the soul of a sacrificial lamb
my words will take you to where your ancestors crawl on their hands
serving penance
for having an invalid as one of their descendants
you wanna know me
i'm borne of only two words that were on noah's ark
i'm not the best
but f*** with me i lay your soul to rest
forget your dictionary
grab your rosary and start reciting them hail marys...
My parents said i could be whatever i wanted, so i chose to become an a**hole


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Hie Deacon.Ok it's after 4
i'm better than you in the next life and the one before
forget similes / u a baby i should battle with smileys
 8O  :?  8)  :lol:  :cry:  :oops:  :P  :x  :evil:  :twisted:  :D  :)  :(  :o
when i see you i see an omen with a W in front of it
stop believing your spouse even your sperm count is counterfeit...
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Deacon-Frost slash blaqsoulja why ya seeking attention like Sunday Morning Church bellz
Coz to me ya more f***ed than new convicts  in a jail cell
Deacon how can u be amazing when ya left out standing in the cold
Ya wack spits you drop are old so all you see is dust when they are told
Kid ill crack your dome in two an leave you with splitting head aches
He brakes his neck 4 OVERtoppin so every time he drops a moemish he still has mistakes
Let me pull out the crayons n type cause im about to wax this chump
Straight lumps I produce when I come with grace an begin to thump
You couldn’t be boiling hot kid if you sat on a stove top inside a E.C Three legged pot
Soon to corrode an rot when I bring this decay an start to lace the spot
Goliath top notch? I think not, this kid text is weak like bad knees he just frails
How can u inflict on body parts when ya tail tucked between ya legs
u a Tina Turner fan don’t make me get into details
Lil Man it’s like I was standing here numb cause I aint feeling a thing you drop
U couldn’t look "gifted" if I wrapped u in wrapping paper with a bow on top
To my dismay cremating me to dust is the only way u could blow me away
Your just prey, I Serve you with more PUNCH an longer LINES than a buffet
u]"Nas is lyin when he says hip hop is dead, he's jst gettin old"[/u]
" Jay-Z is president so he's album is for russell simmons and LA Reid"

Now who do you listen to?


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^You mahf***az are triple teaming and I'm still shittin on you.

That not good enough for ya?


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munetsi

Like the Resident Evil series I scare you//
just when you thought one was enough, I dropped two//
Stay hitting, and blocking, cosmic flow staying true//
so tough, had enough? still my guns PEEK-AT-CHU//
Triple Crown winner, they know me but who you?//
*&^%$# &^* %$##? Cat you weak, screw you//
don't mean to tell you, your ryhmes?, they're like doo-doo//
while you chilling on the "cornors" I'm in Honolulu, with your girl//
so please tell me man who screws who?//


one down two to go

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Rhymetodie

this guy needs a week just to write sixteen/
by that time I'll have beaten you twice and wiped the slate clean/
f*** a day dream, my nightmares will distort your mind/
Only time heads is feeling Ryhmetodie, is after snorting lines/
I abortion rhymes so your verse is deceased before conceived/
and I posted first so you have the rest of tha week to tweak,(ya welcome)
I think you got skill being 15, but I can't understand you,/
so I'm forced to DISS-member your structure and murder every granule/
you claim you've only lost twice, I'm calling your bluff/
even when erected your soft, guy, we should call ya "Powder-Puff"/
I've read enough of your POOR verses, its not even funny/
I could find more WORTH in the words on monopoly money/
who's proping this dummy, saying "yeah, he's really nice"?/
wen i bruised, battled and busted you i was havin a blast/
STILL U MANAGED TO GET KNOCKED OUT TWICE LIKE TYSON'S a**/


" the f***a outta my thread son

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blaqsouljah

Animal controll

Impale your face with a nail rake ,I’m coming at you no holds barred like a jail break/
This frail fake is nothing but a fat broken condom baby, a big mistake//
Falling into a battle with me, it seems DEAC has lead you by the nose/
Case closed, like a drug bust I'll make you eat those lines and overdose//
I’ll make your rhymes on point by sharpening your tongue and picking out your brain tumour/
Stick dynamite up your a** like a literal baby boomer, then jam your tongue through your jaw, now that’s tongue in cheek humour//   8O (WTF)
Leave you grilled on the front of my car like a f***ing turkey roast, smoking toes left on the road/
And now I don’t mean to boast, but you pale in comparison to me and I’m white as a ghost// (I'm lite skinned nigga)
As far as winning goes you’re out of the running like crippled presidents/
You’ve spent your common sense (cents) and pH level measures your intelligence//  (sick)
You’ll leave this battle hopping on one foot, talk 'bout going out on a limb/   :lol:  :lol:
Minus the skin, on your way to the deep end of the rhyme book so I hope you can swim// (check Relentless's Location in the profile)
I substituted your blood for sheep’s in a pentagran ritual and it summoned a rainbow/
Your plain flow, has got fans like a dwarfed lil jon, because they get and remain low//
Slice your ligaments four score and watch things fall apart, a halflife tells the tale of relentless’ s lore/
Leave you under the weather like the earth’s core, rip out your roots, you want more?!!??/

SERIOUSLY YOU GUYS NEED TO THROW IN THE TOWEL!

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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: .......You so wack bro..Let me finish ya sorry a** off...A Few overused punchlines n thts tht...
u]"Nas is lyin when he says hip hop is dead, he's jst gettin old"[/u]
" Jay-Z is president so he's album is for russell simmons and LA Reid"

Now who do you listen to?


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Quote from: "rhymetodie"
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: .......You so wack bro..Let me finish ya sorry a** off...A Few overused punchlines n thts tht...

Oh wow thats rich coming from a triple teaming fagget with bad diction

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