You better love me!!!!

[infinite_rabbit]

Hello Hello.

Ok then first post on the board!!!!

Hope to keep the posts as frequent as possible. Ive been watching various battle sites for a while and last week decided Id give it me best, I did post it on another board, but got no comments, so maybe I should got the message, ha hah Hell No!!

So I found dis board seems cool, the feedback is heavy. So ma first few rhymes I wrote  last week, but afetr that Il be writing straight at da board, Fresh as, that is if thats ok???

Ok enuff of this intro lets rhyme........
:-D

TO ALL THE HATERS:

You say you like it rough, “don’t hold back” that’s what you said
Well Ill be tough, ah that’s a shame, now look – ermmmm….your dead
Lights out, night night, you got as much street cred
As a big brother contestant who’s just been evicted

Towering over every motherf***er, look I’m scowling
Trampling over every motherf***er – look your howling
I’ve more heat on ma return than JK Rowling
More controversy than when Beckham starts fowling

Pissed at ma success, you missed your boat,
I aint gonna gloat, errrr f*** it I’ve re-wrote
So make a note “its over” go get your coat
Before you choke, cause I’ll coming for your throat

“Vicky I think your good, but I fell I am better”
Lie!!! What the f***? Why you lie with every letter
Cause of me, your dreams are now even wetter
Squealing to ya home boy, “last night I dreamed I met her”

“Its only a joke, I’m just playing” you protecting yourself
the words that you saying, representing yourself
as a pussy scared of me, go pleasure yourself
have you posted this online, or have you moved to somewhere else?

Ok so its not legendry, but it was ma first kept it short, but you get the idea......so feedback be welcome

Peace

[dropbomb]

i am so shity it ain funny but i am goin to spill on thi thread or u´s not hatin or something coz then i would have been direct jus a spill tht is a ll
hope ya don mind

__________________________--

a little heat to bring weak emcees to the surface below their feet
have a fist fight with the track just to create a beat
I´m the nicest to ever hold mics with
quick to put my fist right where your eye is
enormous is what my size is
control the world with the slightest
touch of sight right from my iris
the true hybrid that is the finest
trying to test me is what the true crime is
you´ll recieve lethal injection through lyrical perfection
I may curse in the mic, but leave it a blessing
i touch mics through
kinetic energy and make them explode like land mines do
I want to remind you what the rhymes do
With a divine glow that´ll f***in blind you
I always battle verses in cyphers
leave ya brain with no ma** like catholic churches with no choirs
brain capacity largest, my mind level´s higher
I spit hot shit like I gargle with fire
Ain´t been back in a while
I´m ready to put niggas back in they place with a mean vicious style
the type to kill you clowns without crackin a smile
leave bodies droppin till I start creatin a pile
then burn the corpses with forces that´ll burn up fire after it metamorphes
of course this flow is more than gigantic - it´s enormous
the lyrical heathen givin out miraculous beatens
the type of emcee that´ll leave your blood bleedin
You must be an atheist if you ain´t believing
move with flames that´ll leave fire frezzin
to contain ultimate knowledge is what we be seekin
creatin typhoons everytime i be sneezing

[RuSh]

hey man i like the british accents sounds otherwise

[infinite_rabbit]

Are either of these replys in responce to the initial thread???

I was looking foir a bit a feedback/ direction on first freeby??

C´mon guys, you speaking in riddles or what? :-|

[RuSh]

what ya wanna know man hit us up with questions

[Anonymous]

Ha!! Looks like someone is following in the wack a** steps of dropBomb. uR flow is WACK, u sound like some little chick on her period tryna get attention. Loose ur flow. Go to MC skool.

Hahahahahaha :-|

[infinite_rabbit]

Thanks youve been alot of help, Im glad you can tell - I am on my period - Bitch, f*** You, mr Im so tough I post as anonymous.

You´ll see!!!! :-Y

[nawdiZ]

hay rabbit,
u wana battle me,
and yo drop bomb r u from jhb,yeah me too!

[infinite_rabbit]

Think you find I allready have - OBIEWORLD!!!!

Peace out.

[RuSh]

hey we got a new member thats starting out with battline whats up!

[Anonymous]

DROP SOME SHIT, I GOT THE VIRTUAL BEATBOX.  I WANNA SEE YOU TWO BATTLE IT OUT.  

[nawdiZ]

hay wud up,
rugged_man,
yeah im as ready as eva :-Y  :-P

[nawdiZ]

ill post up ill battle from obie world as soon as its done ;-)

[TKRocks]

ay, rabbit guy, not bad for a first rhyme, I must say. I´ve seen worse... on this site, nogal! you´ve got the right idea with your punches, but you need to get more content into your rhymes. its no good rhyming two words well but then everything else on those two lines is a bunch of meecrob! look around the site, especially on the battle forum and look at the way that these emcees take two rhyming words and turn them into a message using the content of the lines. hope that helps. peace son!

[nawdiZ]

hay peeps heres tha battle 4 you all!!
~gurl against  gurl~


~~to nawdiZ from infinite_rabbit~

So Nawdi, you say you from the hood  
Show me you skill then if you’re any good
You wont beat me, no one ever could
“that waskally rabbit” you sound like Elma Fudd

Girls on girl, Ohhh sounds like real fun
But I’m afraid I know your mums a nun
Kicked from the convent, for an oven with a bun
That was you, her baby boy son

Name of a girl, but looks like a man
Say what I want cause I know that I can
Words that are hard, they’ll soon have a ban
Double my sales even you’ll be a fan

I haven’t much ammo, and I don’t get your name
So Ill do all I can do to make you look lame
Soon as you post, it wont be the same
Cause Ill be much better, and that’s such a shame

Ill end it so quick you wont av a clue
How I’ve offended and affect all you do
My rhymes will insult cos you see them as true
So take a pop Nawdi_Z, Im waiting for you…..


~to infinite_rabbit by Nawdi_z~

im gonna sterolise my gat
and paralise your back
yo! bitch u wack
u way off tha track
thinking you got skills,
ill kik you to tha black hills,
were your body will be mangled
and tangled
together,
dont bug me cos u think ur clever
ull be ugly for ever,
u looking dead
all you be doing is giving head
you f***ing inbreed
im tha 1 whoes ahead,
u hooking "octopus"
dont be an optimist,
cos im winning this
im tha lyrical apocalypse,

dont u mean drop not pop?
you are tha bunny damn so funny,
go hop to tha shop and buy your a** a dildo,
your rhymes?
i just dont feel yo,
my crimes?
two times,three times, four times,steal,
five times,six times,seven times, deal,
past times,hard times,a thousand times, kneel!
you bitch im for real!!!!

i look like no man,
im as original as hell,
ill neva be your fan
dont test me bitch ull be put under a spell,
this is were your logic comes into play
my name got nothing to do with u any way,
lets just say im kurupt
nawdi_z will leave u fukt,
shawdy plz dont let me erupt,
like a volcano,
you insain yo,
to challenge me
ahhh bits youll see me
leaving all shallow,narrow minds,
poisoned by my lyrical bow n arrow,

dont be hysterical cos im leading you by far
if u not listening ill leave u with a fat scar
i wount be needing you
as a fan,
no u can,
NOT!, talk so much shit,
you will get shot,
straight through tha heart
and that will be it,
youll be pleading,
telling me your tha best,
you know im just playing
putting you through a test
so u dont ever again fuk with tha best,
cos ull just be causing your self pain
finished you and slain,
ull get no money gain,
my words choke,and prevoke again,
and soak, up tha crap and convert it to style
ill be tha last 1 with a smile!! :-Y


so peeps do your voting!!