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Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: WESTMONK on May 06, 2007, 03:59:07 PM

Whats good y'all , I just got into this whole producing thing and I think I need a little constructive criticism from y'all, I'd really appreciate it.

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Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: daliq on May 07, 2007, 09:26:27 AM

Aaight..
Could u post up a rar file on sendspace?

Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: Bondizzo on May 07, 2007, 09:41:38 AM

I'll take a look at it when I get home, I'll give you my full opinion, it will only help you get better, what software/equipment you using ?

Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: WESTMONK on May 07, 2007, 04:27:31 PM

I'm usin magix and reason

here's the alternate link for the beat:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/i5vnz3

Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: daliq on May 07, 2007, 05:50:12 PM

nice one
I'm a jazz fan
u can only go up dun.. practice y'r good ear

Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: King Genius on May 07, 2007, 05:59:24 PM

hehehe.....
Constructive: u just started indeed, u'l get beta with experience. I was recently listening to the very first beats i made and i was disgusted, and then i wasnt as good as u now. I like the jazzy part, but i think its part of magix. i advice throwing magix away, it will do more harm than good. And listen to more music.

Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: WESTMONK on May 07, 2007, 06:05:03 PM

Thanx man, I'll definatley keep on the look out .

Title: Amateur's beat
Post by: Bondizzo on May 07, 2007, 07:53:55 PM

not a big fan of sampled work but its not bad for a first beat, its underground, I dont know if thats a bad thing now but yeah, the drums could be stronger, get better kicks and what happened at 1:41 sounds like you didnt loop it right, my first beat sucked big time, keep doing your thing and in time you'll be on the charts like me :)