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Title: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on July 28, 2008, 10:57:49 AM
yo I come through at lunchtime while u watching the e-news channel/
and kidnap you take u suckers to my dark tunnel/
with my lyrical scripture being ur exact fixture/
therefore dimming your future of ever being one of my features/
because u are as useless as an aborted foetus/ trying to battle me/
put my right hand on your chest and make you turn left/
and when u try to deliver a punch/ u get turned to lunch/
now watch as I spit a Split second/ and make u suckers come second/
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Darklight on July 28, 2008, 11:20:22 AM
excuse me according to time it's still f***ing brunch
yo shit's like balboa without qualijuice, don't pack no punch
'put my right hand on your chest and make you turn left'
i only turned left cause of the smell of yo breath
you think by coming first it makes me look crappy
shit i only come second to make your wife happy
enough wasting my time you not on my level
top cla** defender of rap, you'sa has been like the brothers neville...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Malcom E.K.K.S on July 28, 2008, 11:30:26 AM
^^^^ each one teach one, how does it feel to be on the end administering the ether? :)
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Darklight on July 28, 2008, 11:36:47 AM
^^^^ each one teach one, how does it feel to be on the end administering the ether? :)

i'm like a dyke after a sex change my :-X
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: the brand® on July 28, 2008, 03:27:37 PM
wtf?>>>>>>>PTF
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: 1kind on July 28, 2008, 08:59:43 PM
excuse me according to time it's still f***ing brunch
yo shit's like balboa without qualijuice, don't pack no punch
'put my right hand on your chest and make you turn left'
i only turned left cause of the smell of yo breath
you think by coming first it makes me look crappy
shit i only come second to make your wife happy
enough wasting my time you not on my level
top cla** defender of rap, you'sa has been like the brothers neville...

Ill for sheeziee...that was lethal
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: The Angry Hand of God on July 28, 2008, 09:03:04 PM
I'm ill

Indeed you are.
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on July 29, 2008, 08:18:56 AM
yo look crappy head joe Brandfort's bitch//
stop replying like a snitch or you gonna get a stitch//
my capabilities make your mother want to  blow me//
and your father wants to slaughter me for making his wife a subject of my polygimi//
hold it jimmy// you don't even know me//
the last time I had a bad breath was when I ate human flesh//
for my ceremonial trash//  the swordsman killing fresh//
I'm chilling with my boy Julius Ceaser// and I can see Ca**ius holding the Gladius//
and shit is about to get serious// and I have it all on hold//
while my buddy Van Gogh paints a picture// of me writing a deadly scripture//
preparing your body for slaughter//
You are the source of my laughter// cause my attention you are after//
bitch a**// ;D
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: dropbomb on July 29, 2008, 08:23:44 AM
excuse me according to time it's still f***ing brunch
yo shit's like balboa without qualijuice, don't pack no punch
'put my right hand on your chest and make you turn left'
i only turned left cause of the smell of yo breath
you think by coming first it makes me look crappy
shit i only come second to make your wife happy
enough wasting my time you not on my level
top cla** defender of rap, you'sa has been like the brothers neville...

Ill for sheeziee...that was lethal

OMG
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: cash on July 29, 2008, 08:30:36 AM
no ur not ;)
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Myth on July 29, 2008, 08:34:00 AM
comeon let a neegar have his minutes of E-fame....

keep em coming swordsman
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Mprofeti the Radical Process on July 29, 2008, 11:46:32 AM
yo look crappy head joe Brandfort's bitch//
stop replying like a snitch or you gonna get a stitch//
my capabilities make your mother want to  blow me//
and your father wants to slaughter me for making his wife a subject of my polygimi//
hold it jimmy// you don't even know me//
the last time I had a bad breath was when I ate human flesh//
for my ceremonial trash//  the swordsman killing fresh//
I'm chilling with my boy Julius Ceaser// and I can see Ca**ius holding the Gladius//
and shit is about to get serious// and I have it all on hold//
while my buddy Van Gogh paints a picture// of me writing a deadly scripture//
preparing your body for slaughter//
You are the source of my laughter// cause my attention you are after//
bitch a**// ;D

WTF......
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Darklight on July 30, 2008, 12:03:42 PM
I can see Ca**ius holding the Gladius

I'll be gladius if you shut the f*** up... ;)
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: dropbomb on July 30, 2008, 12:40:40 PM
I can see Ca**ius holding the Gladius

I'll be gladius if you shut the f*** up... ;)


hahahahahahahahaha amen
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: erikah on July 30, 2008, 12:45:44 PM
 :DAaaaaaaaah wat a cute realm of fantasy........ ???
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: the brand® on July 31, 2008, 08:12:34 PM
i cant tell if u guys are being sarcastic or
really mesmorized..
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: 1kind on July 31, 2008, 08:36:47 PM
i cant tell if u guys are being sarcastic or
really mesmorized..
the last time I had a bad breath was when I ate
bitch a**// ;D

I can't top that....hahahaha
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on August 05, 2008, 08:43:50 AM
Inside my mind there's a cyclops who Tai box/
No one is safe inside da bat cave's your grave/
I'll have u flayed for nine-hundred & ninety-nine days/
Crime pays homage to seas in crime waves/
Did i not say inside u'll find a maze?/
In a blind rage i seperate your eyes from your face/
This is common place shit like this don't even amaze/
Whoeva speculates won't be around no more/
Only da fact remains to dislocate da bone of your jaw/
This is not a chore this is what i live for/
This is destiny da very reason why i was born/
To be da spawn of a unicorn in physical form/
My astral projected is still undetected/
In da land o' da desperate children is getting molested/
NuTron Don from da mystical tribes of shaman/
I've been engraven to empower da matrix/
Da one but not Neo i'm really an agent//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Z-DIGITAL on August 12, 2008, 12:13:10 PM
Nigga I see you got a little spark to your flow
Studied mine, now you got a little arch in your flow
Can you breath under water, can you do it below
I mean can you hold your breath if I decided to flow
If you think you number one, then I must be zero
Which means I still come before you even though Im below
Get it right get it nice I neva do it twice coz Im that thorough
Reign supreme on you like your Moses and Im the Pheroah
Your like the dollar and Im the Euro
Son face it in the dark when things make you fart who's your hero
& you know I never write shit I just mic'd it
You can read it for free its on me but please dont bite this
But keep pimpin' the movement like Hiedi Fliec did
Keep it nice with the beats I'll keep it nice on the mic kid
No rhymin' its the mirror of lyrical death you facin'
I can see you smillin' coz you know Im ill blazin
I didn't just kill you I took you straight to creamation
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Mr Dymize on August 12, 2008, 12:22:51 PM
excuse me according to time it's still f***ing brunch
yo shit's like balboa without qualijuice, don't pack no punch
'put my right hand on your chest and make you turn left'
i only turned left cause of the smell of yo breath
you think by coming first it makes me look crappy
shit i only come second to make your wife happy
enough wasting my time you not on my level
top cla** defender of rap, you'sa has been like the brothers neville...

OHH MY f***IN WORD.....

Shit is dope yo...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: dropbomb on August 12, 2008, 01:50:59 PM
excuse me according to time it's still f***ing brunch
yo shit's like balboa without qualijuice, don't pack no punch
'put my right hand on your chest and make you turn left'
i only turned left cause of the smell of yo breath
you think by coming first it makes me look crappy
shit i only come second to make your wife happy
enough wasting my time you not on my level
top cla** defender of rap, you'sa has been like the brothers neville...

OHH MY f***IN WORD.....

Shit is dope yo...

hai jey wiet fokol ka rap hehehe
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on August 13, 2008, 11:52:51 AM
You bitches really needed my shit//
just to show you that you ain't fit//
enough with the bluff// and all the rappers claiming tough//
Son my shit is rough// thats why I neva shit on you rookies//
bcoz ya all crumble like cookies// now look I'm a Swordsman//
on top of it I'm the Soxman// now you need to get real and google me//
and stop making fun of yourself like teedies bee// doing
for many years I've been spitting// you only discovered the mic now//
and claim to be killing who? me.  son you's more pathetic than a faggot//
with a f*** me sign// you got frankenstein shortcuts// now you forgot who's real//
son I meant It when I said I'm ill thats why I'm going easy on you//
greasy homie// I don't need to spit it only// I just make it oily//
then you'll be slipping on it// 10 more rhymes for the planet orbit//
got your a** all scared like the female norbit// you's a misfit//
bitch I'm even falling asleep trying to write this//
now come back and try to diss//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: rob_one on August 13, 2008, 11:55:51 AM
You bitches really needed my shit//
just to show you that you ain't fit//
enough with the bluff// and all the rappers claiming tough//
Son my shit is rough// thats why I neva shit on you rookies//
bcoz ya all crumble like cookies// now look I'm a Swordsman//
on top of it I'm the Soxman// now you need to get real and google me//
and stop making fun of yourself like teedies bee// doing
for many years I've been spitting// you only discovered the mic now//
and claim to be killing who? me.  son you's more pathetic than a faggot//
with a f*** me sign// you got frankenstein shortcuts// now you forgot who's real//
son I meant It when I said I'm ill thats why I'm going easy on you//
greasy homie// I don't need to spit it only// I just make it oily//
then you'll be slipping on it// 10 more rhymes for the planet orbit//
got your a** all scared like the female norbit// you's a misfit//
bitch I'm even falling asleep trying to write this//
now come back and try to diss//

Weak, weak, weak.
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: 1kind on August 14, 2008, 12:29:40 AM
You bitches really needed my shit//
just to show you that you ain't fit//
enough with the bluff// and all the rappers claiming tough//
Son my shit is rough// thats why I neva shit on you rookies//
bcoz ya all crumble like cookies// now look I'm a Swordsman//
on top of it I'm the Soxman// now you need to get real and google me//
and stop making fun of yourself like teedies bee// doing
for many years I've been spitting// you only discovered the mic now//
and claim to be killing who? me.  son you's more pathetic than a faggot//
with a f*** me sign// you got frankenstein shortcuts// now you forgot who's real//
son I meant It when I said I'm ill thats why I'm going easy on you//
greasy homie// I don't need to spit it only// I just make it oily//
then you'll be slipping on it// 10 more rhymes for the planet orbit//
got your a** all scared like the female norbit// you's a misfit//
bitch I'm even falling asleep trying to write this//
now come back and try to diss//

Swordsman...i don't usuall diss...but that was quite whack...whackedy wack wack
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on August 14, 2008, 02:07:32 PM
Look dawg I said I was going easy man, thats why you think its whack, whack, whack, whackedy whack.  I just wanted to show 'em that I got more skill than any person can imagine.
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: dropbomb on August 14, 2008, 02:42:49 PM
Look dawg I said I was going easy man, thats why you think its whack, whack, whack, whackedy whack.  I just wanted to show 'em that I got more skill than any person can imagine.

textin dope shit aint child's play bra if ur easy shit is whack i wanda whtz up wif ur hard shit
u haven't shown that u got more sikker shit than what u posted man cum now
tease wif a dope text an leave us wonderin if u can blaze the mic as u text on the net

not vice versa

u dig
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Mr Dymize on August 14, 2008, 02:45:24 PM
Look dawg I said I was going easy man, thats why you think its whack, whack, whack, whackedy whack.  I just wanted to show 'em that I got more skill than any person can imagine.

Just let go dawg....
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: cash on August 14, 2008, 04:10:03 PM
dudes is postin garbage like the thread title's junk mail/
I just need a AG BARAAACK pic titled epic fail/
but ima keep it to myself like my beemer keys/
or how i was with ya girl on her knees while i freed my seeds/
Jesus please! guess niggas is tryin really hard to be mc'ees!/
If that dont work out then nigga try a tender with dat B.E.E/
I take up arms n kill niggas like im Julius M/
Niggas pointin fingers at me sayin "the truth is HIM"/
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: dropbomb on August 15, 2008, 08:27:14 AM
dudes is postin garbage like the thread title's junk mail/
I just need a AG BARAAACK pic titled epic fail/
but ima keep it to myself like my beemer keys/
or how i was with ya girl on her knees while i freed my seeds/
Jesus please! guess niggas is tryin really hard to be mc'ees!/
If that dont work out then nigga try a tender with dat B.E.E/
I take up arms n kill niggas like im Julius M/
Niggas pointin fingers at me sayin "the truth is HIM"/

hahahahahahahahahahahaha
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Volatyl on August 17, 2008, 09:35:54 AM
Im done after this theres no sequel,
your lyrics are dumb like playing i spy with blind people,
im lethal, with titles stackin,
and its Xmas everyday like i made a career out of rapping,
guns clappin, got sums adding,
your homo lyrics got the crowd laughing,
my lines are dope, like im sponsord by coke,
you just aiming at the wrong audience,
like telling a hobo a knock knock joke,
with desperate niggas behind u, best not drop the soap,
im deadly never scared to shoot at you niggas,
yall aint penetrating, im bulletproof to you niggas,
too much self praise, acknowledgin your own fake tactics,
yall just feeling yourselves like permanent stray jackets...

volatyl
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick on August 17, 2008, 01:36:26 PM
i cant tell if u guys are being sarcastic or
really mesmorized..

Me too ???
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on August 18, 2008, 09:23:28 AM
Man I got nice verse departures//
that penetrate your weak satures//
I break your skeletal structures//
just because ya'all acting like vultures//
damn everybody trying to tell the Swordsman he is wack//
I hit you with the lyrical 18 divide by 2//
Spray paint a picture in your head by violent propulsion//
the real shit that causes all your brain nerves to malfunction//
rhythmic flair// shit I'm not fair//
I've been holding back// cause I know you cats would scream out wack//
like you know the rap// I get with the clap//
give the crack boy a crack// then spend all your cash//
to break the voodoo// I'm not young zooloo//
so you can neva tell me what to do//
your whole crew sucks// only I can see that shit//
Koli went to jail just for slapping weak cats//
and then you call him a convict//  he is better off on my dick//
the Monopoly would neva be top of the pyrimid//
now you admit// I've been lying low like a fugitive//
now I'm dropping ill shit like an aids patient on a laxative//
I'm a landmyn so when You dropbomb I blast it off me//
robone I'll hunt you down through multiple homicide agencies//
then they'll fake shit like giving you free vacancies//
ya'all not mc's// I got more spitting than 7 seas//
I'll be back bitches// just to give you more stitches//
Soxman Da Swordsman you heva heard of me//
ya only know the Swords part// you don't know the Sox dart// throwing
cranium cracking// :P

Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: rob_one on August 18, 2008, 09:54:53 AM
Man I got nice verse departures//
that penetrate your weak satures//
I break your skeletal structures//
just because ya'all acting like vultures//
damn everybody trying to tell the Swordsman he is wack//
I hit you with the lyrical 18 divide by 2//
Spray paint a picture in your head by violent propulsion//
the real shit that causes all your brain nerves to malfunction//
rhythmic flair// shit I'm not fair//
I've been holding back// cause I know you cats would scream out wack//
like you know the rap// I get with the clap//
give the crack boy a crack// then spend all your cash//
to break the voodoo// I'm not young zooloo//
so you can neva tell me what to do//
your whole crew sucks// only I can see that shit//
Koli went to jail just for slapping weak cats//
and then you call him a convict//  he is better off on my dick//
the Monopoly would neva be top of the pyrimid//
now you admit// I've been lying low like a fugitive//
now I'm dropping ill shit like an aids patient on a laxative//
I'm a landmyn so when You dropbomb I blast it off me//
robone I'll hunt you down through multiple homicide agencies//
then they'll fake shit like giving you free vacancies//
ya'all not mc's// I got more spitting than 7 seas//
I'll be back bitches// just to give you more stitches//
Soxman Da Swordsman you heva heard of me//
ya only know the Swords part// you don't know the Sox dart// throwing
cranium cracking// :P



Look, I'm sorry to say this, I really am, but don't post these anymore. Your writtens are weak. You may have the dopest flow ever but on paper you're coming off...eh. Work on your shit. Then come back.
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Inca on August 18, 2008, 10:37:03 AM
Man I got nice verse departures//
that penetrate your weak satures//
I break your skeletal structures//
just because ya'all acting like vultures//
damn everybody trying to tell the Swordsman he is wack//
I hit you with the lyrical 18 divide by 2//
Spray paint a picture in your head by violent propulsion//
the real shit that causes all your brain nerves to malfunction//
rhythmic flair// shit I'm not fair//
I've been holding back// cause I know you cats would scream out wack//
like you know the rap// I get with the clap//
give the crack boy a crack// then spend all your cash//
to break the voodoo// I'm not young zooloo//
so you can neva tell me what to do//
your whole crew sucks// only I can see that shit//
Koli went to jail just for slapping weak cats//
and then you call him a convict//  he is better off on my dick//
the Monopoly would neva be top of the pyrimid//
now you admit// I've been lying low like a fugitive//
now I'm dropping ill shit like an aids patient on a laxative//
I'm a landmyn so when You dropbomb I blast it off me//
robone I'll hunt you down through multiple homicide agencies//
then they'll fake shit like giving you free vacancies//
ya'all not mc's// I got more spitting than 7 seas//
I'll be back bitches// just to give you more stitches//
Soxman Da Swordsman you heva heard of me//
ya only know the Swords part// you don't know the Sox dart// throwing
cranium cracking// :P



I cant believ u actualy posted this gabbage,
U shud b ashamed of yoself....
i couldnt bring my self 2 finish reading it/
I burnd kilojoels try 2 reason it/
Shit...i aint gona say nuthin more/
exapt, whacknes galore/
retards adore u/
embarased 4 u/
....-shaking head-....i cant beliv this cat...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: mphossiblepunkstah on August 18, 2008, 10:24:31 PM
tjo tjo..........
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: ToXic Candy on August 18, 2008, 10:34:19 PM
This is some real MC dissing right there... :o
I guess all those listed in Swordsman's piece are still in the process of wrting their comebacks but I believe not even months later can anyone top this shit right there.

*...damn his ill....*
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on August 19, 2008, 10:43:11 AM
"ya'all hating me cause ya ain't me''. wild candy baby yu's appreciated,the rest screw you bcoz you all kissing a** to cash you rob_one but you can't actually break da Swordsman
I'm done with ya cats cause you got no skill but you really know how to hate. who ever called you tight is a disgrace to life.

Peace
Title: Re: I'm ill (As Per Rotation)
Post by: GreenBat on August 19, 2008, 12:39:21 PM
My world wide web stretches beside Tibet/
I'm far fetched tough to figure out hard to digest/
My design lets me get inside heads/
I'm straight wit da flavour i don savour no sidesteps/
Wit hi-tech biceps i'm strangling dialects/
I oversize my text don ask me how i gets/
Wilder than an animal that walks on its hindlegs/
Salute da Luger shoot da intruder/
I tri-angle shorts untill u lose your Bermuda/
Launch cold war missiles that's confusing Cuba/
No clues to da future it's all blind luck/
Behind da mind f*** is I got your mind knocked up/
You's a wet blanket/
I caught u red handed/
Man u all about garbage like Fred Sanford/
I neva staggered i managed to work thru da urge/
Log on to myspace & u can actually view my words/
Although da truth hurts they'll tell u that da proof's preferred/
I'm from da ground up i'll tell u that's da roof u heard//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: 1kind on August 19, 2008, 04:10:16 PM
Nice one to the greenbat
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Inca on August 20, 2008, 10:05:20 AM
"ya'all hating me cause ya ain't me''. wild candy baby yu's appreciated,the rest screw you bcoz you all kissing a** to cash you rob_one but you can't actually break da Swordsman
I'm done with ya cats cause you got no skill but you really know how to hate. who ever called you tight is a disgrace to life.

Peace

Ya'll hate me blah blah blah...
Swordsman, yo writtens denote a very serious whackness symtom/
u stand a beta chance battlin a 1 eyed kliptomaniack wit tourettes syndrom/
sarcasm is tha lowest form of social discors/
But in yo case its a substitud 4 ill mataphores/
I sow yo lil post, i wasnt moved/
Ur lucky i even said aniting u shud hav been boo'd/
I find yo particulor choice of crack amusing, illnes bogus/
I spit shit with an impact that knocks tha wind outta u, n yo eyez loose focus/
INCA's spellbinding rhyming/
Is deliverd wit imaculate timing/
U came 2 AG for moral support n companionship/
If dope linez wer a sword, ud stil lack tha swordsmanship/
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: SUPER RUTHLESS on August 20, 2008, 10:14:27 AM
Yo Inca did u go for some dictionary cla**es when u were gone... u coming back with fire dude
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Psycogenesis on August 20, 2008, 11:15:36 AM
What's Ill? Lines that hit like steel anvils?
I've read a few rhymes and non fit the bill,
Ampel lines with no prescription pills,
some of these cats just need to see doctor Phil,
punchlines that's more feminine than sandles,
The bandits still keeps it real like old skool samples,
claiming it for a good cause but they aint got no rubber bangles,
The writing's on the wall of the mind vandals,
But cats don't hear cause they're ears are covered by their ankles,
Society thinks I'm square cause I got the right angles,
but like Kunta Kinte, I just wanna shatter the shackles,
chain mail for snail pace on railways,
diagnosis is ill but never seen dr dre or octagon,
Hip Hop Temple reborn to perform Autopsys on scorned cats that's foreign...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on August 20, 2008, 03:04:35 PM
Again & again i delivered cinamon scents/
Recogmends which evidence & switch my offence/
Small views thru a big lens that prick da sense/
False pretence i'm still out to seek revenge/
For da cats who was finally forced to sleep in dens/
In a city where da profits neva meet da endz/
Visualize i'll summerize as one o' da guys/
You're looking @ me but felt u had da sun in your eyes/
Tell u something @ least i got something obese/
Full o' callories something that da fat lady needs/
True indeed she demands i press repeat/
Or do an encore on anything a chief decrees/
No more antics from now on this ant'll mix/
While u were sampled to show how well u handled dicks/
And for all o' you romantics that can't resist/
I got a chainsaw ice picks & candlesticks/
I got red roses spiked bats & bandages/
I got structure now all i need's to add da bricks//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on August 20, 2008, 03:13:07 PM
What's Ill? Lines that hit like steel anvils?
I've read a few rhymes and non fit the bill,
Ampel lines with no prescription pills,
some of these cats just need to see doctor Phil,
punchlines that's more feminine than sandles,
The bandits still keeps it real like old skool samples,
claiming it for a good cause but they aint got no rubber bangles,
The writing's on the wall of the mind vandals,
But cats don't hear cause they're ears are covered by their ankles,
Society thinks I'm square cause I got the right angles,
but like Kunta Kinte, I just wanna shatter the shackles,
chain mail for snail pace on railways,
diagnosis is ill but never seen dr dre or octagon,
Hip Hop Temple reborn to perform Autopsys on scorned cats that's foreign...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Psycogenesis on August 20, 2008, 03:22:14 PM
What's Ill? Lines that hit like steel anvils?
I've read a few rhymes and non fit the bill,
Ampel lines with no prescription pills,
some of these cats just need to see doctor Phil,
punchlines that's more feminine than sandles,
The bandits still keeps it real like old skool samples,
claiming it for a good cause but they aint got no rubber bangles,
The writing's on the wall of the mind vandals,
But cats don't hear cause they're ears are covered by their ankles,
Society thinks I'm square cause I got the right angles,
but like Kunta Kinte, I just wanna shatter the shackles,
chain mail for snail pace on railways,
diagnosis is ill but never seen dr dre or octagon,
Hip Hop Temple reborn to perform Autopsys on scorned cats that's foreign...
Don't hate, what you can't infultrate,
some cats are big fish, and some cats are bait.
Go to Dr Phil, I don't battle girls...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Volatyl on August 20, 2008, 04:59:06 PM
Green bat you sick son... but feel this

I got word for these losers/
acting tough behind their computers/
niggas who rep soft/
and the only thing backing them up is a desktop/
f***in with hiphop/
they love to pretend/
but the mac-10 will bring your life to an end/
let the hustle commend/
yall some bitch niggas with sick desires/
snitch niggas who just wired like dial up/
internet gangster, wat you packin a virus?
nigga switch up your course/ i see ryt through you
the only thing you packin is a trojan horse/
tryna prove that geeks can be cool too...



Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on August 21, 2008, 09:49:32 AM
with the sword I give the bitch bat chest bone breakage//
ur bladder burst causing leakage//
first pain forced wreckage//
you fake f***s I'm a savage// my knowledge delivers damage//
INCAcerate me with your wack shit?// bitch u not likely
I whip it precisely// thats why you don't even like me//
I intimidate you like a bitch is by a lightning//
with the shenobi I cut the wings off so call me the Joker//
you suffering from alzheimers// I block your sinus//
capacitate your lungs with killa gas// now you's a minus//
the genesis of a psyco has ya cats taking for your riders//
(http://E:\ADS42AB a**ignment 1 2008\Add Head.png)
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Psycogenesis on August 21, 2008, 11:28:42 AM
Annihalate the ones that debate but don't step to the plate,
cause the pupils dialated too late to save the fate of hate rhymes,
Free styles written but no mukus for spittin,
side splitting head ache darts that's encrypted,
but medicinal like the use of Eucaliptus, muslims and christians,
unsolved cases like who shot Tupac - no witnesses,
the bliss flies pa**ed ones with heads hung high,
we remember that "the revolution will not be televised",
Franchized manditory mechanical head bob,
but hip hop like rocking your head at the robot,
motion sickness fills the mouths of the speechless Arrested Development,
Upgrade my memory to that of an Elephant,
So I know, groundless statements can't man handle it...
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on August 21, 2008, 01:23:27 PM
mental cavity destruction//
rhythm eruption//
suddenly cracking your weak spines//
with these lines// 4giv' my sixth sense
if ya'all cannot comperehend// should've asked me beforehand//
to test ya'all with my fitness qualication machine//
my downfall has neva been seen// like the 1stpope's
a**asination scene// well I'm not the last hope//
I'm the killa ya'all running from// last mission could've been successful//
if it wasn't for dat fool// taking too much time to kill within a technical school//
I told him to go in slash 3' and bounce out to the Technical Drawing cla**//
not to brag on his a**// and then I told him once he's done to call the police//
with the 2760 I borrowed him// now he's gonna be a victim deep inside the prison//
I told him to wash the paint off his face within 45 minutes of applying it//
In dat case he would be unidentifiable for atleast 30 minutes//
now I'm dissapointed with the rest of the mission//
guess the next one doesn't need any rookies//





 

Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Inca on August 25, 2008, 11:24:54 AM
with the sword I give the bitch bat chest bone breakage//
ur bladder burst causing leakage//
first pain forced wreckage//
you fake f***s I'm a savage// my knowledge delivers damage//
INCAcerate me with your wack shit?// bitch u not likely
I whip it precisely// thats why you don't even like me//
I intimidate you like a bitch is by a lightning//
with the shenobi I cut the wings off so call me the Joker//
you suffering from alzheimers// I block your sinus//
capacitate your lungs with killa gas// now you's a minus//
the genesis of a psyco has ya cats taking for your riders//
(http://E:\ADS42AB a**ignment 1 2008\Add Head.png)

U cal that a come bak?/
AG'rs hold me bak 'for i clobber this scumbag//
I expected a beta retaliation frm a turkey sandwitch/
It takes more guts than brain- to mension my name-
in the same verse u spit a mouthful of gabbage/
and only 2 closing lines of artificial knowlegde/
u need to learn, i didnt dis u jus to spite u/
shame...u even moaned and whined that i don lyk u/
runnin yo mouth and sayin u intimidate me, what a load of nonsense/
yo rhyme scheme is wobbly, we'll need a magic spell to balance yo sentence/
this swordsWOman must be insane/
blabbering that he'll ''capacitate INCA's lungs with killa gas''/
1st capacitate yo cranium wit a brain/
besides, thats the day u pull a monkey out yo a**/
''the genesis of a psycho?'' wats so special about it?/
ur posting a bunch of bollocks, the subject matter is illnes, how does it feel to be an mc without it?/
dare block my sinus bitch, n ill sneez u out/
it didnt take much for me to sort u out/
yeah im a minus (sign) doubling as a hyphen to create a compound word/....(e.g. Inca-nated)...
for to even tink u compare is so absurd/
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Inca on August 25, 2008, 11:50:23 AM
To: Swordsman

A metaphorical invitation has been issued to you, to attend 'Gimme a word'. . . Only if u feel worthy of the task shud u participate. . .
The 1st word has been posted already...meet u there...
From: the Incarnated 1....halla
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on August 25, 2008, 12:42:35 PM
Untill 55 5's gets 5000 replies/
I'll have 909 vibes devided 12 times/
4 corners 4 walls 4 sides per say/
89304 seconds per day/
60 minute intervals 9 hour shifts/
Dropping 3 heavy anvils @ 90 degree angles/
2 billion people are 40 percent likely/
To survive on all 8 diagrams that is Tai-Chi/
But da 7 lean years for my peers will be their deaths/
Cos of da 49 errors that are still in their heads/
Number 13 is unlucky & has tripple da threat/
So just da 2 of us makes it 1 on 1/
Untill my crew comes then da odds are 20 to 1/
Wit 17 every session u coming up short/
And my retirement @ 30 wasn't once explored/
But then again a perfect 10's no wondering thought/
And that's without counting all da numbers in sport//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Volatyl on August 31, 2008, 02:18:27 PM
 ::)you just had to get all digital...

Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: DR LEGEND on August 31, 2008, 04:20:35 PM
ayo i come through holding four automatic  pistol
eyes out and face looking mean the dude has gone awol
teflon vest with a v neck on my metalic chest
history in a making. this cat got be recognized as one of the best
get into a appliance store steal 2 microphones and live the rest
get into my studio and sart rapping
move into an open space an start writing
motherf***ers you say im stupid too much hatin
f*** your freedom this is rap is my kingdom you just made a deal with a phenom
looking like 5 a**ylums. i penetrate to your deaf minds
skinned alive but still alive. this is still my time
you use words that are not applicable to rap
f*** bombastic words that shit is crap
any goin against me gon die, il stay the best as long as ima live
try to dissobey my linez. im gonna take you six feet deep using my rhymez
you been hatin since da one, this is just the negining you watch me when im done
i dont need your compliments you looking like a bunch of ornaments
im from queens where rap is alive, whack niggaz we gime em swine
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on September 01, 2008, 03:07:57 PM
GreenBat scratches his a** & yawns :D
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: 1kind on September 01, 2008, 09:38:08 PM
Madaf***a I'm ill ;D :D
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on September 09, 2008, 09:09:34 AM
aiyt fellas' play time is over now I'm officially closing down this thread.  It's time for fresh stuff. Peace.   

SESSION LOCKED//////////SESSION LOCKED//////////SESSION LOCKED//////////SESSION LOCKED
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on September 09, 2008, 11:08:52 AM
So hot i spell using parafin gel/
This is way more than flames this
is kerosene hell/
Man i gotta lotta nice bads they
thought i mean well/
My idea's too dirty to dwell inside
a clean cell/
Besides i'm an infidel da reason i fell/
To provide u wit da intel. that made
your knees swell/
I plundered da libraries of ancient Greece/
So that da modern day Olympics ceases
to be/
I made u guess wit your last breath where
Jesus'll be/
But i foresaw da closed door inevitably as/
You'll see da have nots'll grab wot technology
has/
Either over or under but neva da same number/
Who'd o' guess a guy wit no legs could be da
Blade Runner/
You just discovered recently u've been misinformed/
There's nothing worse than spending time behind
prison walls//
 
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Swordsman on September 10, 2008, 11:09:53 AM
knock urself out......
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Volatyl on September 13, 2008, 09:22:42 AM
Its the revival, i got shit locked n loaded/
run up on me i wont condone it/
God Reincarnated Pac n Big to me/
Fresh out your bubble its plain to see/
You just a clone kid/
Blowing the roof off northgate/
I megaphone the dome/
Raising my money up/
shit i ROSEbank the zone/
switching labels you can call me the brandman/
making money rise, this aint gladiator/
but il make a grand stand/

im not the best if i am then its a lie,
coz that wud mean dat id have formed some kind of a line,
i only conform to forming lines when its crunch-time,
knocking you out now thats one hell of a punchline
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on September 13, 2008, 11:30:29 AM
Am i a one man army or a one man clan?
I'm not just lookin @ these devils rocking up @ da jam
Step into da motuh of hell got experience to tell
Love lost da cost of u gettin tossed
Out your neighbourhood by forceful eviction
Da cashless edition by a bastard admission
As Cloe & Clement clung to their worldly posessions gone
Da same turmoil ever since da man was spawned
Rumble ther's trouble as their big pot boil & bubble
You can forget 'bout being humble
A short articulate way from rough sex wit word play
Mind's being trapped in da worst way
Might as well confuse Friday wit Thursday & get drunk
on Thursday
For popping da tarts topping da charts shopping in carts
Every day events in a latteral sense
You was caught having a laugh @ some fools expense
Lethally vendicative fellows control da gallows
Da shape of their tallons scrape da nape of our melons
Broad minded liberals achieve minimals
Hexagon decimals cos we all criminals
Raw 2 da core see them juggle da ghetto
Ay yo trap a f***en animal feed him your hand & ditto.
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on September 13, 2008, 11:37:49 AM
To undastand da Bat u need to dive wit scubatank/
To a place where they Rolling Stones & rock shit
like Hoobastank/
Get tanked on beer this is bubonic baby/
Wild like Society's threat u can not fade me/
Hate me i'm da illest emcee in my cla**/
See if school of thought was a sport your a** be
coming last/
In da mean time i'ma catch me some mean time
quit smiling alltogetha these cats is feline/
So old first wave heads is senile i roll wit convict
click so i'm penile/
Not big or black but i still walk a greenmile//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Volatyl on September 13, 2008, 02:14:09 PM
I got that propane infested saliva/
my flow is gasoline/
everything im spitting is fire/
Im the spark in a blaze/
wid shocking lyrics like a charge in the page/
up against me il just darkin your face/
il have you changing your race/
my capabilities is far beyond that/
with a mental that only thinks of the sickest raps/
its the illest mind beneath this fitted cap/
i get iller and iller each time i take a shot to the head/
so what the f*** you think would happen if i was braindead/
but nah i refrain from becoming an insane cabbage/
id rather stick to just having brain damage/
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on September 15, 2008, 12:48:02 PM
I practice beneath da stars throwing murderous darts/
Plus i'm known to spit bars on da surface of Mars/
I hope i told u retards to be nervous of sharks/
Yo your X marks da spot nigga mine marks da man/
& u getting a hand's not a part of my plan/
Pardon da Don cos my NuTron is starting a scan/
Turn da dial back to broadband as sharp as i am/
You'd have to rise really soft cos i cut where u stand/
That's just nuts damn how da hell i rhyme for days/
Dropping it cave-like check me by my primal ways/
Got u worried i don't speak u get a silent gaze/
Untill i blaze rap take it as a sign of rage/
Simon says nah Simon ain't got nothing to say/
Cos it's my time to blind u wit a shine of my ray/
Excessive see me examine extra effort i'm an expert/
I maintain da method of outsourcing my next word/
Playing charades i tell da stories using gestures/
Bubbles'll get burst so it's best if i left first/
Unlikely to get nursed da wounds gonna just get worse/
Like gangareen da lyrics that i spit is infectious/
Had u walking 'round sectors deader than spectres/
As i sneak my steel thru metal detectors//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Z-DIGITAL on September 29, 2008, 04:04:05 PM
Im ill
I still get flu shots
& paper traced like 2 PAC
Kids watch me like new season of boondocks
My kinda talent remains rare like moonrocks
& I remain war pronounced backward
that sounded ackward, f*** it, just call me toe-foo
Im so ill I spread it to everyone that knows you
By the time you catch I'd have outgrown you
I rent rhymes out 'f you need help I got plenty to loan you

Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: WORDSMITH on September 30, 2008, 10:36:01 AM

Illness is my second name My first is HIV//
Through the previlged, the poor I pa** with a fake ID//
My status is obscure, pure raw, with no cure//
I rhyme as i bore a deep gorge up in stores//
Im ill to my metalic bones my raps are insane//
My mineral style flows, making cats sound stale//
I dig a hole in your soul as i start to engage//
see a punch with 2 hole and nuckles will break//
if you try to go hand to hand//
I boomarang and hit back like a rubber band//
My typa illness is nothing similar leprosy//
cos im ten times viciuos as i'll cover whole body//
A financial virus Im coming for your money//
Im cunning, you all sunny//
Im stunning, you all hungry//
Im gunning, you'all got a permanent smile//
the catch is! you not funny//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: GreenBat on September 30, 2008, 03:45:50 PM
To be an emcee i personify expansion/
My rhymes need so much room my mind's like mansion/
On point off da mark orderly or random/
Every line is worth 5 mics every verse is an anthem/
& wit skillz as ill as mine i can have pillars climbed/
Wit binary language more imposing than Philistines/
Emcees like me'll rhyme as long as da flame lasts/
Wit elements twice da size an elephants frame has/
To be an emcee i had to struggle & train/
Run da comarades bare feet & suffer da pain/
I'm a verbal athlete my technique is far from common/
I spit 'till my lips is raw wit blisters on 'em/
My flows can punch holes in da walls of a sound booth/
Had engineers up in arms try'na down tools/
To emcee you shloud forget about groundrules & hit 'em
wit darts so hard that even da ground moves/
To be an emcee'll even force you to grow dreads/
Wit a steel pulse about da size a whale's chromozone gets//
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: Z-DIGITAL on October 01, 2008, 11:10:42 AM
To be an emcee i personify expansion/
My rhymes need so much room my mind's like mansion/
On point off da mark orderly or random/
Every line is worth 5 mics every verse is an anthem/
& wit skillz as ill as mine i can have pillars climbed/
Wit binary language more imposing than Philistines/
Emcees like me'll rhyme as long as da flame lasts/
Wit elements twice da size an elephants frame has/
To be an emcee i had to struggle & train/
Run da comarades bare feet & suffer da pain/
I'm a verbal athlete my technique is far from common/
I spit 'till my lips is raw wit blisters on 'em/
My flows can punch holes in da walls of a sound booth/
Had engineers up in arms try'na down tools/
To emcee you shloud forget about groundrules & hit 'em
wit darts so hard that even da ground moves/
To be an emcee'll even force you to grow dreads/
Wit a steel pulse about da size a whale's chromozone gets//


Nice hommee, smooth like a models legs........
Title: Re: I'm ill
Post by: WORDSMITH on October 02, 2008, 11:22:46 AM
Cute... Ey Mr Bat any material out there? download links? hook a nigga up? same to you Mr Z-digi