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« on: May 15, 2006, 03:16:19 PM »
I'm a new cat. I'm Absolute Diction/ASD from Port Eli, but i speak isiZulu (dont get it twisted, i'm not a vernac MC). I'm only 15 years old, but I ain't looking for pitty. Here's a short verse, i wouldn't mind feedback though (negative or positive, much like batteries)
This is 16 bars attempting at punchlining/
Your lyrics have lost all its cuting edge like blunt rhyming/
You kick like flat soccer balls and broken CD's/
When you rap i'm watching a second rate version like a stolen TV/
I'm on point like a dart and i never miss the target/
Your styles cheaper than items sold on the black market/
You claim to flow like rivers i make you evaporate/
You like a demon trying for heaven you'll never go pa** the gate/