SE7ENSANDMAN

SE7ENSANDMAN · **on:** October 04, 2006, 06:11:32 PM

Most thugz claimin the game R artificial/
no one loves that life...
ya rhymes reveal to me who's really official//
I can tell by-the-way-U-marvel-at...
gunz & drugz & slugz/
most of yous.. R merely postin as thugz//
So-what-if U caught...a blade on the side of ya cheek/
or maybe... U caught a wound..
from getin rock'd wit da heat//
Maybe U found ya dunnz layin in creekz/
maybe U found ya sista face-down...shiverin..
decrepid & weak//
U gonna tell me thatchu still gonna roll wit da gunnz/
allowin ya life...to diminish..
in the trenches & slumz//
Yall ni99az blind...deaf...stupid..& dumb/
thats how I tell which ni99az lived it...
& which.. ni99az frontin as one//
Yall rapperz talk alot for 16 barz/
my life is played over again...
everytime I see my 18 scarz//
6 in da chest...& 3 in the navel.../
5-in-da-leggz..4-in-da-armz..
nearly slain like Able.......................///

Deuce'sScoundral · **Reply #1 on:** October 04, 2006, 09:19:31 PM

not feelin that brah...

eraze · **Reply #2 on:** October 05, 2006, 08:34:44 AM

dont know about u gguys but i find hard reading thru rhymes when i have never heard that track... ... coz i dont get the feel, dnt know....

maybe coz am not into reading poems, coz that wat rhymes with no song are to me....

dat dude who happens to rap! · **Reply #3 on:** October 05, 2006, 08:53:47 AM

I Think that verse is okey, just lacking something, not sure what it is but most def sumthing is missing!

Explicit

Skivvy-G AKA Mic's Myth · **Reply #4 on:** October 05, 2006, 09:52:47 AM

Tyt Flow. I think that was hot yo, & good message.
Big Up

SE7ENSANDMAN · **Reply #5 on:** October 05, 2006, 02:55:12 PM

No doubt... I undastand its hard to get a feel for someone's flow just by readin the poetry... I mean, if it sucks, it sucks... Im OK with that... I'll try to post up some audio just so the flow is heard.. Thanx..

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