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Abominable Sandman

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Ayo this is the life story of a character named Script

Yo Yo
Meet script,  born around 1996
In the pages hospotil around the book district
A straight up ryme with a legall verse nationality
Used to bus with other verses and loose there mentallity
now this is where the story twist seems
at the age of sixteen
he had  started goin to bars  sniffin drugs on the street
Got married later to a certain chick from rapperville
Bit her pussy and rgot recycled to another ill ryme writter
A ghost writter stared haunting
Got WACKed on the head by a gangster and diyed right there and then...

DAmn
 little sum sum like that


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Uncoordinated brain cells.
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if you born in 96 that makes you what? 11?
Trapped In The 90ies Nigga.


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@Abominable Sandman

What's the moral of the story...  :?:  :?:  :?:

i can hardly comprehend as i read through... :?:  :?:  :?:
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As I see it its the story of a rhyme written in 96, but if its only 2007 now, it cant have turned 16 yet.

Its a nice concept, but its horribly executed. sorry. :cry:  :cry:




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yeah... the concept is pretty mush dope but one has to read it a couple of times before actually comprehending it
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Quote from: "pYROKINETIX"
As I see it its the story of a rhyme written in 96, but if its only 2007 now, it cant have turned 16 yet.

Its a nice concept, but its horribly executed. sorry. :cry:  :cry:


CAN YOU SAY UNDERSTATEMENT  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

That not good enough for ya?


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Eish, Sorry About dat :oops:  :oops:  :oops: ... I just had an idea in my head and had 4 minutes to put it write it down before my time ran out.... The clean new improved EDIT is comin out soon
 little sum sum like that


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Quote from: "Abominable Sandman"
Eish, Sorry About dat :oops:  :oops:  :oops: ... I just had an idea in my head and had 4 minutes to put it write it down before my time ran out.... The clean new improved EDIT is comin out soon
yeah we bliv u son. Take your time.
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Quote from: "Abominable Sandman"
Eish, Sorry About dat :oops:  :oops:  :oops: ... I just had an idea in my head and had 4 minutes to put it write it down before my time ran out.... The clean new improved EDIT is comin out soon


not if I decide to put ya idea out first moron!  :twisted: whats keepin me from biting that half-a**ed "4 minute impulse" of a poem/rhyme u just layed out for the world to grab and turning it into a real gem...uh-huh,
the (missing) moral in this story is to keep ya ideas to yaself if they aint ready to be released yet...
*glances at rhyme pad underneath..mhhh  :wink:


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haha just playing  :lol: ..............or am i?


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Yo Son. I like th concept fo real. A script that was written then used 16 years later by someone else, making th writer a ghost write correct???

Keep up th effots son. u doin Good :wink:
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Quote from: "Skivvy-G AKA Mic's Myth"

Keep up th effots son. u doin Good


I agree... and the good thing is that the moral of the story
wasn't delivered to  you on a tray...
ONE HAS TO READ BETWEEN THE LINES
which goes to show that not only are you a good writer
but a good thinker

Can't wait for the improved version... :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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