Polygamic Matters

Abominable Sandman · **on:** August 15, 2007, 02:31:42 PM

Ayo this is the life story of a character named Script

Yo Yo
Meet script, born around 1996
In the pages hospotil around the book district
A straight up ryme with a legall verse nationality
Used to bus with other verses and loose there mentallity
now this is where the story twist seems
at the age of sixteen
he had started goin to bars sniffin drugs on the street
Got married later to a certain chick from rapperville
Bit her pussy and rgot recycled to another ill ryme writter
A ghost writter stared haunting
Got WACKed on the head by a gangster and diyed right there and then...

DAmn

The Angry Hand of God · **Reply #1 on:** August 15, 2007, 02:34:09 PM

What the f***?

RearrangedReality · **Reply #2 on:** August 15, 2007, 02:45:54 PM

:lol:

Stone the Dave · **Reply #3 on:** August 16, 2007, 06:29:45 AM

Uncoordinated brain cells.

briCK · **Reply #4 on:** August 16, 2007, 11:34:01 AM

if you born in 96 that makes you what? 11?

Mr Dymize · **Reply #5 on:** August 16, 2007, 11:37:40 AM

@Abominable Sandman

What's the moral of the story... :?: :?: :?:

i can hardly comprehend as i read through... :?: :?: :?:

The Angry Hand of God · **Reply #6 on:** August 16, 2007, 03:44:43 PM

As I see it its the story of a rhyme written in 96, but if its only 2007 now, it cant have turned 16 yet.

Its a nice concept, but its horribly executed. sorry. :cry: :cry:

Mr Dymize · **Reply #7 on:** August 17, 2007, 11:26:52 AM

yeah... the concept is pretty mush dope but one has to read it a couple of times before actually comprehending it

Lord Deacon Of Frost · **Reply #8 on:** August 17, 2007, 12:37:06 PM

Quote from: "pYROKINETIX"

As I see it its the story of a rhyme written in 96, but if its only 2007 now, it cant have turned 16 yet.

Its a nice concept, but its horribly executed. sorry. :cry: :cry:

CAN YOU SAY UNDERSTATEMENT :lol: :lol: :lol:

Abominable Sandman · **Reply #9 on:** August 17, 2007, 02:17:28 PM

Eish, Sorry About dat :oops: :oops: :oops: ... I just had an idea in my head and had 4 minutes to put it write it down before my time ran out.... The clean new improved EDIT is comin out soon

Stone the Dave · **Reply #10 on:** August 17, 2007, 02:24:04 PM

Quote from: "Abominable Sandman"

Eish, Sorry About dat :oops: :oops: :oops: ... I just had an idea in my head and had 4 minutes to put it write it down before my time ran out.... The clean new improved EDIT is comin out soon

yeah we bliv u son. Take your time.

Thornz · **Reply #11 on:** August 17, 2007, 03:08:33 PM

Quote from: "Abominable Sandman"

Eish, Sorry About dat :oops: :oops: :oops: ... I just had an idea in my head and had 4 minutes to put it write it down before my time ran out.... The clean new improved EDIT is comin out soon

not if I decide to put ya idea out first moron! :twisted: whats keepin me from biting that half-a**ed "4 minute impulse" of a poem/rhyme u just layed out for the world to grab and turning it into a real gem...uh-huh,
the (missing) moral in this story is to keep ya ideas to yaself if they aint ready to be released yet...
*glances at rhyme pad underneath..mhhh :wink:

Thornz · **Reply #12 on:** August 17, 2007, 03:13:05 PM

haha just playing :lol: ..............or am i?

Skivvy-G AKA Mic's Myth · **Reply #13 on:** August 20, 2007, 03:44:15 PM

Yo Son. I like th concept fo real. A script that was written then used 16 years later by someone else, making th writer a ghost write correct???

Keep up th effots son. u doin Good :wink:

Mr Dymize · **Reply #14 on:** August 20, 2007, 04:30:14 PM

Quote from: "Skivvy-G AKA Mic's Myth"

Keep up th effots son. u doin Good

I agree... and the good thing is that the moral of the story
wasn't delivered to you on a tray...
ONE HAS TO READ BETWEEN THE LINES
which goes to show that not only are you a good writer
but a good thinker

Can't wait for the improved version... :lol: :lol: :lol: