Open mic... Er1 invited

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

I see dead people, the future holds wars//
death talks by politicians,  ready to remorse//
JZ corruption, a**umption is he the next pres//
Death stares, dead glares, man im dead scared//
kill for Zuma, f*** the law//
f*** the po po, cuffs and all//
guns spray like graffiti on the wall//
In all the commotion, i ask where's the Lord//
The devil draws deciet on the recipt of the cost of living and//
His Earthly advocate recieves the profits and dividends//
Satan speaks with split tongue of those snakes slithering//
from good to evil, JZ be delivering//

that line i bolded looks familiar 

What? You think im biting???
I dont know how to prove i didnt, all i can give you is my word.
Plus i only noticed your line now when you pointed mine out

[Swordsman]

According to AG hu's got the rights to that line: volatyl.

Punishment time.

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

ill battle for freedom then. and i wasnt biting!

[GreenBat]

c-jay rhymez?Nah more like c-gay rhymez/
Da reason da Bat's back is to change todays minds/
U ain't got punchlines like mine even if u tried/
U neva be my size cos it would leave your brains fried/
I like 2 picked on that means that i'm ill/
That also means u weak bitches outthere fearing my skill//

[c-jay rhymez]

c-jay rhymez?Nah more like c-gay rhymez/
Da reason da Bat's back is to change todays minds/
U ain't got punchlines like mine even if u tried/
U neva be my size cos it would leave your brains fried/
I like 2 picked on that means that i'm ill/
That also means u weak bitches outthere fearing my skill//

green bat i give you a bet not a b.e.t/
ima have no mercy on you you gonna wish you were sixteen/
youl change color to blue, cut the green/
how many times have you battled me/
and how many times you have won?, none/
your rapping makes me believe you are one years old and with you im done/
birds like you dont fly/
i kill em with lyrics they slowly die/


f*** greenbat

[GreenBat]

You won?U coulda fooled me/
What did u win?/
U couldn't change my colour green/
Untill u admit u a Queen/
c-jay u'd have to go run on a f-en da freeway/
Get youself a Dj maybe then u'll be less gay/
I'm fresh to death i'll put your fresh to rest/
U could not stand da test if i made u a guest/
U haven't battled as long as u say u have/
U's a joke u make me laugh @ da rest 'o your staff/
Little bitch that u are u could not be on par/
God damn i'll leave u open like i'll leave u ajar//

[WORDSMITH]

A verse, a script, a track, i'll write it black/
My line, will stun, a pun, yo skull will crack/
You  still a quack, fight me I will pack/
You just a snack, no back bone or a neck/
well take a nap, you just a clone not an act/
man you too weak, i won't fist, i will slap/
extract amap make way for me to clap/
8 bars to tell you that SARCASTIC is back/

TAKE NOTE & WATCH THIS SPACE

[GreenBat]

You sing a song for instance/
That show sicker symtoms/
I wordplay dimensions all ova da worst/
That snowballs & rolls down a mountain on Earth/
Yo i plant letter seeds so my mouth sprouts words/
You ain't heard that them white coats'll take u away/
Lock u up long enough it'll make u insane/
& yet an ape has da same make & shape of your brain/
In a drain sewer doer like Sadam Hussien/
Da impact was so sudden on Southern terrain/
You were known to spread blame when u entered da frame/
I'm in O.T u was @ da end o' da game/
Wit a semblance of a purpose like citizen Kane/
Sniffing octane sipping on barley & grain/
Getting drunk untill u wanna jump da gun/
I gotta hunch that somebody wanna feel me punch/
Like a bunch o' hard rocks took control of your lunch/
Made your tummy turn feeling like u over-indulged/
There's no time like da present left to do it to death/
But it's too bad u got boo-ed & it ruined your rep/
Pretty soon u'll drop dead wot do u wanna bet?/
That it's gonna be a Bat hitting u in da head//
 

[Z-DIGITAL]

CLa**IC

Like nike in 72 Im cla**ic
I show it through my style of rappin'
Keep peeps in suspense, keep 'em askin
Rhymes magnetic, keep people attracted
Holdin' on, to my everyletter, coz I only reveal a fraction
Call me the imagechef, I cook food for thought
Mouthwatering, like a 5 course
Cla**ic like 36 in SA's favourite tomatoe souce
Cla**ic, like young miss Diana Ross
Cla**ic, like the year of the first Porsche
The reason Im so ill is coz I keep it cla**y
Nobody out there could come close or even match this
I keep ya face light up like matches
I paint pictures through speeches my flows art
I keep it simple yet pa**ionate, modern day Mozart
The poster boy for nonchalant things envougue
Fresh, the way I set things in mode
My whole lifes a kodak, so ill I forget to pose
Subliminal raps come so easy I forget to flow

[GreenBat]

CLa**IC

Like nike in 72 Im cla**ic
I show it through my style of rappin'
Keep peeps in suspense, keep 'em askin
Rhymes magnetic, keep people attracted
Holdin' on, to my everyletter, coz I only reveal a fraction
Call me the imagechef, I cook food for thought
Mouthwatering, like a 5 course
Cla**ic like 36 in SA's favourite tomatoe souce
Cla**ic, like young miss Diana Ross
Cla**ic, like the year of the first Porsche
The reason Im so ill is coz I keep it cla**y
Nobody out there could come close or even match this
I keep ya face light up like matches
I paint pictures through speeches my flows art
I keep it simple yet pa**ionate, modern day Mozart
The poster boy for nonchalant things envougue
Fresh, the way I set things in mode
My whole lifes a kodak, so ill I forget to pose
Subliminal raps come so easy I forget to flow

Yeah yeah i'm feeling this verse right thurr U killed it man; "I paint pictures through speeches my flows art/I keep it simple yet pa**ionate, modern day Mozart/"Thaz wot i'm tokn 'bout big up!

[kalidascope]

    
wow! theres sum real wack rappers out there

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

   
wow! theres sum real wack rappers out there

I'm guessing you tight then. Show us what you got then

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

Yep Didnt think so ^^^^

[1kind]

stop hating 

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

stop hating 

Me???
I'm just tryna stop other people from hating.