You've gotta lot of work to do. The strings are nice if you could.....clean them. clean is not the right word but hopefully you get it, they disordely, na'mean. And that flute could be the highlight of the beat, but you need to something about the scores ey. sounds like you just played random keys and hoped it fitted in with the horn. Nah buddy, doesnt work like that.
You've just started right??? Or you're in your first year going to the second?
You'll get there with practice man.
Peace.
J-oNE