honestly
, ive read ur raps before and they always hve the bragadocio battle bravado of the undy emcee with clverness & twisted wit if i may, i like em...
now for the joint, it took me by suprice, figured u for a more agressive Mc but u chilled back on this one, maybe its cos o the theme of the joint but it did take me by suprise. with that said i have to say i liked it, didnt dislike it, didnt expect it but after i listened to it sounds realy good, im hopin however that the music on the project as a whole doesnt follow only this typa narration...
the beat: its very very mellow, its nice, allows u to really speak ur mind...liked it
the verse: would like to knw a bit more about what inspired that piece, jus so i undastand the story better
the mastering/recording: It NEEDS work, jus to gt the voice out more to enable more clarity of the message. listenin to it theres a hiss in the background o the track the whole time. i think the gods tried to gt clarity by filtering the recording and the consequence is that certain parts where u say such words as jus, , thoughts, conscious, (the sssss) they have a sharp attack on em...
but its really mellow sun, diggin on it...