look dog i listened to your ish like three times, the beat is on poin but the flow and the rhyme is not doing it for me mayn, the ish was supposed to be like some gangsta typa shit, but you recked the whole ish up by using that bubblegum flow, u shud a put on some real nasty and agressive attitude just to make the ish fun, na'msayin?
but keep on doin that ish nucca
