J-oNE Beats up for crits

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

Aight, I just made this beat like yesterday and I got a lil stuck when it came to mixing so ye. Please can yall help me out.
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[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

anyone?

[oints]

ima download this later tonight ma dude, give it a proper listen and break you off that FEED 

[Darklight]

this ish is hot my man, sounds like it belongs on a jigga album

[MOFF G]

this ish is hot my man, sounds like it belongs on a jigga album

he a jigga fan....
just got this nd will feed on the morrow.1

[Darklight]

killer switch at 02:30... only problem i have is it sounds like someone is jacking off at 00:06

[J-oNE/Pat-B-Rick]

lmao! Ya neh, jacking off. Haha. But thanx so far gents. Moff G.. Hw'd u knw dat?? Im sure ive neva told u

[Prof. X (of The B.e.et Academy)]

Beat sounds dope... But I still gotta listen to it through headphones or a better interface since you asked about mixing... I bumped through my laptop speakers because I was kinda in a rush to sit down... anyways, I'll give more feed later... X.

[Prof. X (of The B.e.et Academy)]

Aight... I'm back. I peeped the joint, and I gotta say the kicks sound a bit like they aren't part of the beat... They stand out just a bit - and they have more of a click sound than an overall wholesome sound.

That's just how it sounds to me though. Dope beat none the less.

[MOFF G]

lmao! Ya neh, jacking off. Haha. But thanx so far gents. Moff G.. Hw'd u knw dat?? Im sure ive neva told u

this world is small....