you know how to mc, and your can project what you are saying.but dog if you gonna an mc with a soft heart...hahahahah...mcs will have that and your liver for breakfast.
anyway back to your shit, i do feel that shit..but dawg..cummon, i feel you compromised a lot for rhymes sake, don´t fall for the hype..don´t change what you wanna say for rhyme sake and also don´t just rhymes coz you have a rhyme.
mcing takes courage and faith in yourself the rhymes will come where and when they have to, say something first and in the only way you know how.
this piece does say something, you a pussy and want to felt sorry for, by the time you say you feeling sorry for yourself the message is tooo late to be changed. keep on your toes and put fear in the herat of your foes. in a street cypher honestly i don´t think i would have got your entire script coz i would not have been able to stomach an mc feeling sorry for theyself.
but on a whole good shit its definatly far from wack but has its weaknesses quite a few
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hope you heard what i was tryna say and it will help you in the street cyphers as well...
halla
8-)
[ This message was edited by: briCK on 11-06-2003 10:13 ]
